Short Story: Bayside

[kazeryuu]

Everything seemed to be in order. The sea breeze was cooling off the bayside restaurant's outside, while the airconditioning worked extra hard to keep it cold inside. The lights were dim, as I had instructed

Comments

[neo_silentchaos]

I really think that that "curse" of yours is just a figment of your "writer's imagination"!

[anonymous]

Damn... this is good writing! Neo_silentchaos recommended it and I thank him for that. Loved the twist and the timing. I can almost hear the *crash* when his heart fell and broke on the floor. Truly brilliant. :D Write more soon!

crimsonwaters