Lost & Found - Episode 1 Part 3

[kazuko59]

Title : Lost & Found
Chapter Title : Setback and Confusion
Setting : Hidarime Tantei EYE - Post Special Drama
Summary : What if at the end, Ainosuke's resolve crumbles, leaving him vulnerable in front of his older brother. What will Ainosuke do? And how will Yumeto react to the drastic decision his baby brother had come onto?
Rating : K+

Comments

[kazuko59]

thx for ur feedback^^~
glad u like it:) thx^^

[anna_reading]

Hello ^^ I was just about to go to bed when I saw this update so I thought, what's a few more minutes?
Aside from Risou no Musuko, there's a historical drama as well ^^ so excited!
Childish kind of honesty? Hmm... I get that too, especially when he's smiling *takes a moment here to swoon*

The chapters are just good the way they are ^^
And finally a little bit of those three months! Oh dear oh dear Ainosuke is actually awake and listening and I really hope he won't do anything stupid...

I wonder if I should change my pen-name (t)here and review the one over at LJ as well, makes it easier so you could just reply on LJ (plus on LJ I could post another comment/reply unlike FFnet that allows only one)

--> and I did. off to bed for me now =)

[kazuko59]

u know, u can just comment on either 1.. i'll reply it.. eventually *grins*
actually i get that from Ryo-chan's interview about the drama.. he said that Ainosuke was honest n still a child.. so.. there u go^^~ well, his smile helps too..
but.. it's Ainosuke we're talking about here.. he's bound to do smtn stupid n reckless.. although, maybe *smirks*..
thx for reading^^~

[suzaku20]

Finally you update \(n_n)/ banzai..

Ainosuke is so fragile *pats his head* and Yumeto is a caring brother >o<

thanks for update *hugs you* I'm waiting for next chapter.. (O_<)b
by the way Can I add you as my friend?

[kazuko59]

(^ヮ^)
he kinda is, isn't he? n Yumeto always had that impression on me^^~ so.. *grins*
u're welcome :D *hugs u back* n pls do so.. i'll do my best :)
i'll be honoured if u do^^

[tsubasa_quill]

OMGEEE HOW DID I MISS YOUR UPDATE!!!

*mourns the loss of her ninja senses*

onto the chapter...

“Tanaka Ainosuke is the key to solve these cases.”

this one gave me shivers...

""

He looked down on his brother and, allowing a small smile to break through his emotionless façade, leaned down to press a kiss on his brother’s forehead, murmuring his last message.

“I’m so sorry.”

Straightening himself, he watched his brother for a second longer before turning around and walked out of the room.

Once the sound of the door being closed was heard, the boy on the bed opened his eyes. His grip on the bed sheet tightened and he made a small sob before burying his face onto his pillow.""

my heart clenched and unclenched...so glad ainosuke was up...and i love how you describe the characters...so perfect!!

You are awesome you know that!!!

[kazuko59]

there, there.. *pats ur back awkwardly*
well, Fukuchi-san is the cool 1.. i just made things more dramatic XP
thank you.. *blush*
*blush harder* i'm quite sure if I am then u're better.. but, thx^^
thx 4 reading :D

[zeon_avalanthe]

poor Ainosuke..
Gosh.. Yumeto's purpose I believe.. but I'm afraid, in Ainosuke's current condition, he will get the wrong idea somehow..
*sighs*
why life is so hard for them ? *sighs again*

[zeon_avalanthe]

oop~ and one more~ can I add you as my friend ?? can I ?? can I ??
*puppy-eyes*

[kazuko59]

i think Ainosuke misunderstands about a lot of things..
this is just one of them (^_^;)..
of course u can *hugs* say, can i add u back then?

[zeon_avalanthe]

I agree~
really ?? yey~
and yeah, of course you can add me back~
i'd be glad~