TFA 2

[kazuya_raba]

*October 2005*

All day the young man had played his part to perfection.  There were no holes in his armor and not one crack in his character.  In fact, the more he watched him, the more convinced he became that Kamenashi Kazuya was an even better actor than Kiritani Shuuji, and that realization made him more and more…more what?  Curious?  Maybe,

Comments

[ylhen12]

awww poor pi>_< though i'm not really on pikame, i feel sad about him...but i still like this chapter^___^ thanks for the update=^-^=

[kazuya_raba]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

[kawaiikame]

i feel sorry for pi *O*
but akame is love <3333

love it =D

[kazuya_raba]

Thanks! Akame is love, but I do like giving Jin competition. Maybe next time I will switch it around and make Jin the suffering uke. It might be fun.

[kawaiikame]

Hai =) am waiting for it xD

[tia_junan]

When you changed together, I just knew that it was because of...I just knew...I just know.”

Sounds like real talk - reeks of good writing. But this ending? This is too hurried and the summary...? I am wishing it was left more open-ended just to not so severely cut the two parts. Slap me as a complainer. The Jin on his knees and Pi scene is too sweet to cut short. You proved you can do the angst and keep me riveted. So don't stop now!

Ki