More fic!

Jan 07, 2007 21:42

Title: Deal with the Devil (cliched title used only for my reference)
Category: Prince of Tennis
Pairing: Tezu/Ryo
Rating: PG for now
Genre: Humor/Romance
Words: 4,105 for this chapter
Warnings: AU, WIP, unbeta-ed, probably slightly crackish ( Read more... )

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nekokatechan January 9 2007, 08:14:08 UTC
I think it's fairly good, to say that quite a lot of back story happened in this chapter and it seems to set up whatever happens after. I think you should continue, the scenario is original and the characterisation is good. Next chapter?

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kc_evans January 11 2007, 03:11:06 UTC
Thank you for your thoughts and encouragement!! I don't know quite how original it's going to end up but I hope it'll be enjoyable to read anyway!

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cedony January 9 2007, 08:34:32 UTC
This is an interesting premise and it'd be great to see more of it. Your little five year old Echizen and Demon!Fuji was love! ♥

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kc_evans January 11 2007, 03:12:45 UTC
I loved the idea of chibi Ryoma and Fuji meeting! I wish I could just hug them forever 'n ever but then I'd have a jealous Tezuka on my hands and it'll just get ugly from there. He'd assign me so many laps my legs would fall off.

I hope you enjoyed reading it .. thank you for your thoughts!

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surealistic_des January 10 2007, 01:20:33 UTC
very interesting concept (yes.. I like using that word for some reason >.<;;)

I like the how you had the back story of Ryoma and Fuji which contributed to the ending.
Hehe...Fuji as a demon :D :D

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kc_evans January 11 2007, 03:15:31 UTC
'Concept' is a kewl word to use so you should use it! :D

Oh, Fuji, the things you do to your fans. He's going to be playing a big role in the advancement of the plot and I've never really used him before so I'm looking forward to seeing what mischief he and the others will create for our heroes.

I appreciate your thoughts! :)

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mimineko_chan March 30 2007, 04:12:18 UTC
Are you going to continue this story ? Because it is totally worth it ! I want more TezuRyo ! *Whines* ! The description is good and so is the plot ! You have a good imagination ! I just love a sadistic Fuji ! LOL !

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kc_evans March 31 2007, 03:14:40 UTC
I'm actually not sure if I'm going to continue it. It's turning out to be a longer fic than I had envisioned and I'm not really good with keeping up with chaptered stories very well - hence all these one-shots I'm doing. But I appreciate you commenting on this and I'll definitely post up the next chapter if it's ever completed. :D

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mesothelioma prognosis anonymous January 19 2011, 08:05:40 UTC
I can' t but agree.I always wanted to erase in my orientation something like that but I think you' r faster.
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