Comments | kc_evans: What I like to pretend is a fic

kc_evans

What I like to pretend is a fic

Mar 29, 2007 00:08

Untitled
Words: 4,511
Rating: PG
Warnings: Slightly crack-ish cause it'll never happen in canon (and probably for good reason); unbeta-ed; fluffy

Disclaimer: I don't own Prince of Tennis or the characters mentioned within ( Read more... )

tezu/ryo

Comments 20

kurorinslvr March 30 2007, 23:33:20 UTC

that was sweet.
i don't have anything more to say right now. that's odd. my mind went blank.
well, good fic. that's all i can say right now

kc_evans March 31 2007, 03:05:17 UTC

I hate it when my mind does that, too. Sadly, it seems to happen quite frequently and I'm wondering if I should be worried ..?

Hehe, thank you for the lovely comment. If you enjoyed it then I'm quite pleased. :)

obsessive_a101 March 31 2007, 00:45:50 UTC

That wasn't cruddy at all. It was cute.

Poor Tezuka, he was so silly, but in an adorable sort of way. =)

kc_evans March 31 2007, 03:10:19 UTC

I'm sure you're just saying that to be nice. :P But I appreciate it anyway! :)

obsessive_a101 March 31 2007, 17:10:54 UTC

Of course I am *cough* NOT! *cough* ; )

No really, it was a nice to read something light and happy-like.

reutk April 4 2007, 10:03:35 UTC

Tezuka is such a dork (with or without a glasses) i just love him!
i enjoy your fic plenty thanks for sharing

kc_evans April 5 2007, 04:20:00 UTC

He is a dork, isn't he? But he's a cute dork so I don't mind at all. :D

Thanks for the comment, hope you enjoyed reading it! :)

umarekawareru April 4 2007, 12:51:20 UTC

Such an uke!Tezuka you've written. Ryoma really does have him eating out of his palm... so cute ^^ The details were really good, how you described Tezuka in the mirror - if you did struggle with that, well, it was worth it. That was a great bit.

And Horio saying that “Tezuka-buchou is the smartest, best-looking guy in school and you call him just ‘okay’?” LOL. I thought I'd die laughing when I read that. Horio needs to know when to stop sucking up...? XD

I think it's so cute that Tezuka got contacts just to make Ryoma like him. It wasn't entirely clear that they were together at first until you referred to Ryoma as Tezuka's boyfriend. At first I thought they were just hanging out together a lot (that's usually what happens in TezuRyo before they get together). But maybe that's just me being a bit slow XD

You don't really have to pretend. It's a fic indeed, and it's lovely. You win! (And on a completely unrelated note, I think Inui is hottest in episode 37, when he goes to Ginka to scout with that blue cap on ^^)

umarekawareru April 4 2007, 12:54:04 UTC

PS: Mind if I friend you so I know when you post again? :D

kc_evans April 5 2007, 04:17:48 UTC

You know, I didn't realize how "girly" I made Tezuka until you pointed it out. That was completely unintentional on my part, though I'd probably call him more indulgent than uke-ish. But yeah, that Ryoma's got him wrapped around his pinky finger.

Thanks for mentioning that the relationship between them was unclear. I wasn't sure it was that noticeable, either, so it probably was confusing.

And I appreciate your encouragement and thoughts. And of course I don't mind if you friend me if I can do the same. :D