Crack Fic

[kc_evans]

Words: 3,233
Rating: PG
Warnings: Crack-fic, unbeta-ed, slight character OOC

Yep, more crack. Don't ask me why I can't write a semi-serious fic anymore. Maybe it's because school is frying my brain - and rather successfully, I might add.

Comments

XDD;;

[tawnyabyss]

Ahahaha, your fic made me crack up... that was utterly hilarious XD;;
Thanks for sharing! ^^

Re: XDD;;

[kc_evans]

I'm glad you found it funny. ^_^ Thanks for commenting! :)

[litchick87]

who needs help? you, my friend, are a genius. that was hilarious and brilliant! by the time ryoma got to the second vending machine, i was choking out atobe's name through the laughter.

and i just know that root canal will change ryoma's tune real fast, i don't care how much he loves ponta.

this was wonderful. never think otherwise. and thanks for sharing!

[kc_evans]

Hehe, I find Atobe's influence and money a big help, especially when it comes to bad things for Ryoma. That root canal would definitely open his eyes wide to the idea of cutting back on Ponta.

I appreciate the lovely comment! Thank you! :)

[rasengan_gurl02]

Love this so much~!^_________^ Totally Hilarious~! :D

[kc_evans]

I figure if I'm going to write crack, it should be the least bit funny. Hope you enjoyed it. Thanks for letting me know what you thought! :)

[mimineko_chan]

You do know that I am supposed to listen to the teachers right now ? My finals are next week and this is an important class ! *Sigh* But this is still worth it (ask me again when I receive my marks later, jodan).

I agree with litchick87, you are a tensai and this fic is fantastic. It got me really laughing and the students sitting beside me is looking at me like I'm crazy !

*Hugs* Thank you for writting this.

Do not worry Ryoma, I will give you Ponta, and I will not charge you with money ! Hihihi, if Atobe does not accept your offer, I WILL ! LOL !

[kc_evans]

LoL, I've done my share of choosing fanfic over school but over my fic? There's no need. (But I hope you do well on your tests .. good luck! :D)

I'm really glad you enjoyed it. And I'll pass your message along to Ryoma but I think it was a one-time deal. Otherwise I would have dragged him to that date long ago. :D

[umarekawareru]

I'm still laughing from this. Oh Ryoma, I understand you - dentists are the ultimate form of evil. Thankfully I never had sugar taken away, but if that had happened I might have died, and I'm not nearly as obsessed as Ryoma. He probably had a bad time, so maybe I shouldn't have laughed as hard as I did XD Atobe taking away all the Ponta, that was so funny. And Ryoma trying to bribe him with a date, haha. I so loved this fic, dear - the characters' disgrace is something that always cracks me up (must be the little Fuji in me). If I had to quote all the lines I liked, I would have to space it over 3 comments, so I'll pick my favourites.

“Fortunately, we have something called ‘water’. It is good for you and sugar-free. Sit down, your breakfast is getting cold.” The joys of sarcasm. Oh, Tezuka.

Tezuka was torn between incredulousness and exasperation. Echizen still had his cavities and they were now 40,000 yen poorer. Ironic how Echizen Nanjiroh had gotten the best deal out of them all. Somehow I can imagine Nanjiroh doing this XD XD

[kc_evans]

Dentists are evil. I refused to step into one for like 10 years and ate as much candy as I wanted! :D

Poor Ryoma. I was so evil to him and took away his Ponta. I felt bad. Sorta. But not quite enough to not write this fic. :D

Hanging out with Ryoma can really turn a person sarcastic, even someone like Tezuka. At least, that's how I see it. :D And I still hate that stupid last sentence of the story but I don't know how to change it! >.< Grr.

Thanks for your lovely comments! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll be around for a while yet, spreading bad fanfic to yous alls so don't worry! :D

[umarekawareru]

You're welcome ^_^ I don't see what's wrong with the last sentece though - it seems a neat way of finishing to me. I usually struggle a lot with closing (and opening) sentences, but I think you did a good job here. Reading about Nanjiroh's little plot was the perfect funny note to close the fic, I reckon.

I hope we have more "bad fanfic" of yours soon. I'm looking forward to it <3 (And on a completely different note, everytime I see your icon I can't help thinking how much I love it XD)

[kc_evans]

I just think there's something wrong with that last sentence. I like the concept, too, but it's worded weird. And now it's going to bother me until I fix it. >.<

I've gotten all my icons from ego_elite. I love that particular icon, too. It's so very true when it comes to their relationship. :D