[Fic] .:Extent:.oo3

Oct 07, 2007 16:47



Extent
Chapter 3

[Their bedroom]

It was one of those mornings that JaeJoong woke up knowing it was going to be a good day. Somehow, he just knew it when his subconscious filled with uneasiness and he knew someone was hovering over him in his sleep.

His eyes snapped opened and he stared blankly at the person’s face above him before turning and ( Read more... )

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day_moon October 8 2007, 13:03:35 UTC
First? :D YAY

Ok you really don't know me since this is my first comment in the bdsk-fandom and all but oh :OO
I liked it <3

the waking-up scene was amusing <3
And I love how you descripe the interaction between the guys, its seems easy and familiar between them ^-^~
(and I'm always wondering how he manages to look so good too lol)

I'm really looking forward to reading more of that fic
*shuffles nervously on her chair*

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kdotbailey October 10 2007, 02:15:05 UTC
thanks! you ARE first. *hands out cookies* i'm glad you like it! i'm looking fwd to more posts from you! ^^!

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meheartyunho October 8 2007, 15:31:26 UTC
Yay u updated! I was wondering If you were going to keep writing this ^^ I love it, can't wait for the next chapter!<3
meheartyunho hwaiting!

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kdotbailey October 10 2007, 02:15:49 UTC
yes yes! this is slowly coming along...i wrote out my plotline and what i want to get accomplished...the tough part is to actually write it. Thx for reading!

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audreyludlow October 8 2007, 21:25:54 UTC
New reader here!! *waves*

OMG this fic is SOOO good, I love it! I remember I read a fic where Jae always dreamed someone (YunHo? I'm not sure) was going to die and the night he didn't have the dream, YunHo died. Please YunHo don't let JaeJoong die!!! And I laugh with the first scene, YooChun is so cute here ^^

There's a prologue right? I think I missed it -_-

Hope you update soon! Can't wait to read what will happen in the photoshoot

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kdotbailey October 10 2007, 01:59:23 UTC
Thx for reading. Do you know the title of the fic? I want to read it!

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audreyludlow October 10 2007, 12:23:19 UTC
Sorry, but I don't remember the title and I didn't save it in my computer -_- If I find it again I'll let you know ^^

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kdotbailey October 10 2007, 16:27:21 UTC
yay thanks! ^^

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ladydusk_raku October 9 2007, 04:40:38 UTC
Yah! Nooooooo~! Why there? Why stop there? >.< It's getting oh so intriguing by the minute. -pout-

Very well written and good.

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kdotbailey October 10 2007, 02:17:52 UTC
well written? *gasp* you don't know how much that means to me...i have a huge problem with grammar but I'm working on sentence structure...

boo to cliffhangers! but how else will i keep you hooked? ;D

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theinvisibleink February 2 2009, 04:47:33 UTC
The waking up scene was so funny! lol I fear for the last part though. I hope nothing bad happens! I jsut noticed that this last chapter was written more than a year ago. I hope you find inspiration in continuing this! This is too good to be abandoned! :D

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