Beautiful creature

[kdsaj2]

Title: Beautiful creature
Author: kdsaj2
Pairing: Nichkhun/Wooyoung
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Angst, romance
Summary: Some falls in love, some falls in love with the one who was never meant to be his.
A/N: My first time writing smut or anything R plus, please read/ comment, tell me what you think ^^
Khunyoung because they are naturally sexy like that xD
But it's not

Comments

[dreamoscope]

love the angst :) and i love how you repeated that first few sentence into the ending, it makes the piece so much more complete :)

love the way you write, its descriptive without being too overly long. please write more ^^

[kdsaj2]

Thankyou so much ^^
yeah you noticed !! yayyyy~ i was being all poetic and stuff you know :P

you are so sweet :D

[cipherstar]

TT.TT
my otps clashed!!
i can't decide which side i'm on >.<
awww~ Khunnie..
*sigh* well.. as long as Woobby is happy, i'm happy :P

"And even if, even if he wouldn’t ever be loved in return it wouldn’t bother him, for his whole being yearns for that one person and it would always does. But that didn’t mean that it doesn’t hurt.
Nichkhun would keep waiting. Waiting for what he is not sure. But until then he’d held onto the lover in his mind the beautiful creature that was all his. His alone."
->>i cant decide which sentence i love the most..so, there! the whole thing!! LOVELOVLOVE ^_^

thanks for writing this :D
will wait for more XDD

[kdsaj2]

Awww i am sorry bb -__-
But i don't know who i'd side with either D:
this is why angst are so hard ne ?

thanks thanks :D you review is such a treat <33
i'll totally write more :DD

[cipherstar]

naahh..it's okay :)

thanks for the add! :DDD
looking forward for more fics from you! ^_^

[kdsaj2]

thankyou for accepting!~

[devilslover422]

I LOVED THIS!!!

i loved how u repeated the first paragraph at the beginning and the end. it really ave the story something. this is very diff. i mean it's wooyoung who's breaking khunnies heart this time, not the other way around. u dont see much of this!!!! lol

the sex scene was worded sooooo amazingly!!!!!! it was short but sexy!!!!!!!!!!! ur amazing!!!

[kdsaj2]

AWWW THANKS !!! <333
I love your icon ;D

and yeah LOL the prince is always the heart breaker i wanted to try something different xD

*bows head* you are so so so kind!~
<333

[mrskimjang]

I LOVE THIS OMG ;A;
but then my top 2 otps are here.... omg wooyoung you harem lmao xD
THIS IS AWESOME ;A; i always love angst and now added with smut~ it's perfect lol xD
i love the first magical paragraph and how you repeated it in the back x)
write mooar!!! :D

[kdsaj2]

Hahaha it's not his fault, Woo is naturally non-monogamous-ly ? LOL xD
thankyou so much for reading/commenting ♥
i'd write more 8D