Title: I'm still alive
Author:
kdsaj2Genre: AU, angst, drama
Rating: PG-13+
Language, implied smut, however nothing explicit. (implied, implied)
Pairings/Characters: JayKhun
Summary:
“ You shakes your ass in front of strangers for money, it’s not much different!”
“Shit fuck it’s different ! I have my clothes on at all time and I don’t do it for money, and I
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Poor Jay though....... >< KhunToria strikes again!!!! lol Breaking up OTP's left and right!!! lol
This was <3. Thanks for sharing!!! *hugs*
>///////////////< I hope Jay and Khun get back together......
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your comment means so much to me :DDD
Hahahaha yeah sneaky sneaky couple KhunToria xD
thankyou for reading/commening ♥
sounds like you're asking for p.2 ;D
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lol
I reread it again!!!! lol the way you write is so beautiful and addicting!!! Its pure genius. :)
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awwww thankyou so much honey *hugs you cyber-ly*
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jae left???
is this just a oneshot??
lol. but this is good. kinda sad though~
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i would sheesh Khun's a jerk ! JK JK LOL xD
i am thinking of doing a pt 2 or sequel or something if everyone wants one :D
thankyou!~
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Khunnie i love you oh so much.
AND VICTORIA YOU COCKBLOCKER...!
i like this~
continue itttt~ :D
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I am so glad you like it :DDD
hahaha cockblocking makes good plot ;D
i guess your vote is for a pt.2, i'll see what i can do.
Thankyou so much for reading/commenting!
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seriously. the way you word these stuff is just amazing. the whole thing about the city is just just... such a nice concept.
never a fan of this pairing, but this is just.. love.
the whole angst is so heartwrenching, especially when it ends like that. still feels quite unjustified tho, cos khun confessed his sins to his parents, and victoria is out of the picture, but jay still goes away. but that whats makes it so beautiful.. unsolved conflicts. even more painful because they both like each other but cant be together.
you're a genius. seriously.
LOVE THIS. write more please bb :) ♥
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you are way too sweet to me, i am so so so glad you like it, and if you the amazing angst writer approves of this then i am on cloud nine. !
Genius ? oh please your writing is pure genius this can only watch from afar as it cries itself to sleep.
thankyou for reading and commenting bb it means so much to me, i would only write more if you do ;DD
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we should all write more for the sanity of ourselves ahhahaha. writing keeps me sane :)
♥
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LOLOLOL yeah totally *high 5* they'd never put those straitjackets on us again !
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