Comments | kdsaj2: the lights are in my eyes

kdsaj2

the lights are in my eyes

Mar 31, 2011 23:07

Title: the lights are in my eyes
Author: kdsaj2
Rating: Pg-13 to R (not really)
Pairings/Characters: KhunHo

( “Let’s get out of here” the voice reeked sex, raw, lusty sex, his favourite. )

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poppypromise April 1 2011, 13:14:58 UTC

lol KhunHo is all grown up now. xD
I loved it! :D

And, this was wayyyyyyyyyyyyyy sexy. ;)

kdsaj2 April 1 2011, 17:12:19 UTC

Hahaha yeah after they claimed each other as besties in your fic they turn all smexy ;DDD

Glad you like babe. OMG you should write a sequel to your and about how they become teengaers !! xDDD
*just a though, just a though i ain't perv*

poppypromise April 1 2011, 19:55:41 UTC

Mmmmmmm-Hm!!! xD

Omg! I'll do it! :D
It's okay to be a perv...at least I think it is. lmao

kdsaj2 April 2 2011, 05:01:40 UTC

hahahaha xDD

OMG yay !! *so excited*
and i am so glad i don't have to hide my pervy self :DD

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mrschangmin April 1 2011, 16:19:58 UTC

just cant get enough....

kdsaj2 April 1 2011, 17:12:34 UTC

thankyou for reading and commenting <33

acornmama April 2 2011, 07:31:17 UTC

This was fantastic. They are very sexy together.
Does this have a second part that is Khun's reaction/side of the story?

kdsaj2 April 6 2011, 05:08:16 UTC

Thankyou very much for reading. :D
But no i'm sorry i wouldn't know what to write, this had be blushing a bit already xDD

dreamoscope April 2 2011, 12:40:55 UTC

i rarely read R-rated stuff, but this OMG. there's something about the way you describe stuff that is so.. lovely. you have this way of choosing words that just weave emotions through it, and gahhh i love it so much.

i love khun's the light is in my eyes reply. its just sounds so pretty even though its only a sentence.

When within the embrace of the older man he felt the lights of the spring morning penetrating his sleepless eyes.
love. love. LOVE.

gyah you're so amazing with descriptions
/jealous.

kdsaj2 April 6 2011, 05:10:54 UTC

Wah yes ! my fail!R attempt was successful then *so happy*. Thankyou so much bb, and having someone say that you can put emotions in your words is just like, the best hing ever. You are so kind to me gawd. ♥

So glad you like them, i couldn't describe a feel but i felt like them once it's a weird feeling, very happy i got them out haha xD

oh psst says the emotion monarch of angt <3333
i hail thee *bows*