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Eyes On Me - Hikaru

Aug 16, 2009 20:16

Title: Eyes On Me - Hikaru
Genre: Fluff
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Hikato w/ one-sided slight YabuHika
Disclaimer: I own them without owning them :]
Summary: Hikaru always had feelings towards Keito, ever since he first laid his eyes on him. But when he see Yabu fake kiss Keito during a photo-shoot or Wink Up, he couldn't hold back. What exactly does ( Read more... )

pairing: hikaru/keito, hsj: yaotome hikaru, fanfiction: one-shot, hsj: okamoto keito

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foukay August 24 2009, 03:57:26 UTC

EHE I'M, ER, LATE :3
This is cute♥ (:

kebinu August 24 2009, 05:07:05 UTC

np~! better late than never :]

and thanks >< cute is what i aim for :P

rayray0826 August 27 2009, 02:21:40 UTC

I didn't comment on this?? Anywhoo, this was awesome. Keito is so kakkoi!!! The picture that inspired you is amazing.

kebinu August 27 2009, 02:25:32 UTC

haha apparently not XD awww thanks! I KNO RIGHT!? And yesh that picture is >

suteii September 11 2009, 04:57:43 UTC

I loved it, it was so cute. I loved how Yabu made to kiss keito to make Hikaru jealous. Always awesome.

I Loved it. I don't think you need to re-write it at all.

PS: Sorry for the late comment.

kebinu September 11 2009, 20:44:25 UTC

omg you have no idea how freaked out i am XD your like my all time favorite author on the comm! *spazzes*
your like totally awsum, i lubborz you >< XD

but yea thanks for the comment im glad you liked it! :]
lmao i think a lot of people liked that part XD
oh really? ehh well im just really low self esteemed about my works XD

PS: S'ok, i know your situation and such :]

suteii September 15 2009, 03:42:03 UTC

I'm one of your favourite author's really? I find that really hard to believe, there are many people out there that have much better stories and plot lines going. But yay I guess.

I'm sure they did, and don't be so low on your work if you think it is worth posting then you shouldn't feel bad about it, if you are unsure then ask someone to read it and give an opinion on it, where you should change it etc to make it better in your eyes. work with someone to edit it to make it into the best.

Thanks, stupid sister. grrrrr

kebinu September 15 2009, 05:23:54 UTC

lmao well because your like one of the first authors who's stories i read on the comm. and i started that super long trilogy thing that you wrote XD i actually was like omg so long O_O but i have this thing where if i start a story, i have to finish it. So i read all three stories, and it was really well written >< better than i can do XD yea i tried multichapter stories before, i failed for the lack of being able to write consistently >_> but yea your stories rock >< but from what ive read, youve had the best stories and plotlines out there >< so yea XD WOW DO I RANT OR WHAT XD

yea, because this was one of my first few works, i didn't have anyone to look it over, because i was so new to the comm, and didn't have any friends on here XD also i could use my friends in my area, because theyre arent into this stuff, and not everyone knows im gay in my area sooo XD it'd be awkward XD but now i have a beta, yay~ gotta love connections through fanboys XD

yesh, grrr, but when you do get another lappy, itll be alright :]

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