A Good Partnership (1/1)

[sphinxvictorian]

“Pass me the cup, Monty.”

“Yeah, right, okay, here you go.”

“Black, right, one sugar?”  Eddie eyed the cup in Monty’s hand.

“Yeah, Eddie, sure.”

“I’m only asking cause last time you got it wrong, and I ended up with so much sugar in my coffee you could stand a spoon up in it.”

“Whoa, dude, exaggeration there.  It was only three

Comments

[sarren]

Hee that was cool. I just loved the opening scene - great Monty voice, and the way you write their partnership as the most important with benefits.

[sphinxvictorian]

Thank you! Monty is so much fun to write, because he is so distinctive, but that distinctiveness is hard to capture. Glad I managed to do it!