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Maknae Line - Surprise Visitor

Aug 27, 2015 22:08

Author: KeepCalmN_AKTF
Title: Maknae Line - Surprise Visitor
Length: OneShot
Characters: Junsu & Changmin
Rating: G
Genre: non-au
Disclaimer: Read and enjoy - don't take credit for my work.
Summary: Yoochun enlist so Junsu is miserable. He gets a surprise visitor that he was not expecting…at all.

This sucks, thought Junsu as he stuffed his face ( Read more... )

focus: minsu, genre: non-au, length: oneshot, rating: g

Comments 6

14angelfire August 27 2015, 21:43:00 UTC

So many feels T_T (but not in a bad way!) Thanks for sharing c:

keepcalmn_aktf August 31 2015, 10:04:44 UTC

I'm glad it elicited those feelings. xx

n3uromanc3r August 29 2015, 20:10:44 UTC

It was lovely, I really liked Junsu's optimism, I hope after all of them finished military service circumstances will change and allow them to meet publicly or perform together if they want!

Thank you!

keepcalmn_aktf August 31 2015, 10:06:19 UTC

Yeah, I desperately hope for that too...Poor babies, it's about time they can do something without the media pounding at them. I guess we'll see though...xx

missfujoshi2 November 4 2015, 22:44:09 UTC

Hi :)

Oh , I sooo wish you were right ! I was picturing the scene in my head during the reading, and it felt... true.
Like, I think it is possible for them to meet over a game, but I would rather have them talk a little, maybe at least about their loneliness during their hyung-deul absence ?

I love the line : 'The room had been tidied. He chuckled at that. Typical Changmin. Still a neat freak.'

I must say though I feel frustrated. I hoped for some minsu conclusion, but you kept it only general ('once two members from the two sides met - it didn’t have to be him and Changmin ').

I must admit you write way better than me, but on the other hand, I know if I had had such an idea, I would have used it completely differently... Like, I would have chosen to make them talk instead of playing. Maybe I'm just a talkative girl ? Or maybe this just needs a sequel ? *eyes sparkling*

Anyway, I'm off to read some other of your fics.*excited*

Thank you for sharing this! It felt really good. :)

keepcalmn_aktf November 9 2015, 12:03:51 UTC

Hiya,
Thank you! And, yeah you're right. A little talking would be best wouldn't it, but I have a feeling Junsu and Changmin are both individually somehow not ready to engage in conversation with one another. It's probably just me...

Lol...yeah I don't ship MinSu. It's cute but not the best ship for me.

Hehe! I would do a sequel but if you get to know me and my writing I pretty much suck at non-au fics! And considering all the interactions they've been having sicne starting army...yeah, I don't know.

Thank you so much for dropping me a comment! Brings a smile to my face, and apologies for the late reply..
xx