Comments | keepfallingfast: Aim, Snap, Fall.

keepfallingfast

Aim, Snap, Fall.

Jun 13, 2007 14:41

Title: Aim Snap Fall
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Running in circles can do things to your head.

( times like these you wonder if some people don’t get happy endings. )

addison, grey's anatomy

Comments 14

freiheitfuehlen June 13 2007, 19:27:04 UTC

That first paragraph was just very intense, for whatever reason I don´t understand, but you write it very well and I still have that image in my mind of them as twenty-something med students who still had faith. God, reading that makes me dislike Shonda so much more.

livefortonight June 13 2007, 20:25:09 UTC

I am a sucker for Addek fic. ♥ this.

hushpuppyprncss June 13 2007, 22:16:13 UTC

While I'm a MerDer ship...I have to say that his Addek was really good...

And I usually HATE Addek...

hushpuppyprncss June 14 2007, 07:02:40 UTC

I think my Addek heart just broke all over...

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abelfan June 14 2007, 17:16:01 UTC

Isn't that the truth? He's such a bastard and yet I still love Addek. Damn Kate and Patrick's chemistry!

abelfan June 14 2007, 17:14:50 UTC

Oh, this was so well-done! I really liked how it was written, there was a certain rhythm to it that worked. I loved how med student Addison was embarrassed and then med student Derek told her he loved her first.

I felt for Mark and Addison in the one about when they first slept together. Misery indeed thrives on company.

Just an intern, I liked that line and leaving the Mrs. Robinson deal to Derek.

The two sides of Derek are so contrasting, nicely etched here.

I loved this whole part: The man who had adoringly watched you walk down the aisle eleven years ago was now adoringly watching his little anorexic intern in her tacky bridesmaid’s dress. And you were alone, dateless, feeling the dull ache of knowing that Derek probably wasn’t even thinking about your wedding. He was probably planning his wedding to the twelve-year-old.
The thought made you a little nauseous

Oh Mark! Being the only one who really loved her yet she couldn't return those feelings. *sigh*

This, I think, is what many of us Addeks want: To say he’s sorry, ( ... )