Comments | keepfallingfast: Scenes from a Car Crash (Wish You Were Here)

keepfallingfast

Jun 27, 2007 21:51

Title: Scenes from a Car Crash (Wish You Were Here)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: A million little pieces fit together to form the picture.

Part I ( You grew up way too fast, now there's nothing to believe... and reruns all become our history. )

Comments 21

liquid_courage June 28 2007, 02:24:52 UTC

This is pretty good so far, it'll be interesting to see how you write the next part!

flatters June 28 2007, 02:47:30 UTC

Ohh this is really cute. Keep it going!

anonymous June 28 2007, 03:22:21 UTC

I really like the organization of this. With the little snippets of time. I'm looking forward to more.

hopelessly_lazy June 28 2007, 04:26:14 UTC

I'm loving this already. It's written really well, and I love how it keeps moving forward. Please update soon

dolphin18 June 28 2007, 10:12:55 UTC

Great start.