[fanfic] CANDY DIVE - Uruha x Aoi - 01/??

[kei_kyuuketsuki]

Title : Candy Dive
Chapter : 1/??
Author : kei_kyuuketsuki
Fandom : the GazettE, more to come…
Pairings : Uruha x Aoi, Reita x Aoi, everyone x Aoi (or whatever you may call it), more to come…
Current Song : GazettE - $ocial Riot Machine$
Rating : R
Genre : drama, AU, angst, rape, band, prostitution
Warning : slight smex scene, harsh words, bad English
Disclaimer

Comments

[lotos79]

I love this one, seriously!
I have no clue why it has no comments yet.

Hopefully you will continue to translate this one, even when it currently lacks feedback from readers. The story has potential and I'd really like to read how exactly Uruha will turn Aoi's life upside down. ^^

Maybe you should consider to ask someone to beta-read the story before posting, though. The switching between the tenses is rather distracting.

Flashback for the next chapter sounds good~ <3

[kei_kyuuketsuki]

Aa! First comment! *gives you a lot of cookies frantically* ..>////<

ehee..I had no clue either..but maybe, just like you said, I need someone to beta-read this..maybe that's why I need to fix my writing to get more comment..(///w///)a ..thank you for the critic! I appreciated it so much..>///< ..*bow*

Again, thank you very much..I'll try me best to translate the 1st flashback for chapter 2! :D

Thank you for reading this, and thank you for your comment! ~ <3