Oneshot - Final Thoughts

[keiiru]

(HyoYeon's pov)

In the past

• You would often say that you care for me and that I'm the most precious person to you
• You would send me notes and wait for me after school just so that you can walk me home
  
• You were so sweet , taking my hand and kissing it every single chance you get
  
• You would whisper  " I love you ~  " and then gives me the smile which

Comments

[keiiru]

Hmm , sorry if it's too sad .. So do read and comment please .. If don't like please do not read thank you . And no bashing !! I hope you enjoy it and do give comments which can help me improve my writing .. Thanks !!

[waltz1694]

great story! but a bit short!! hope you make a good full story on it! haha!! will always support your stories! You have potential.

[keiiru]

hahas thks !!will do !!

LOLs !

[ext_532108]

tt is kinda a sad story veri touching ~ but nice story make it longer uhs :)

Re: LOLs !

[keiiru]

wahh !! thks !!

[amber_serkly]

I like this♥
simple but intriguing. and not to mention heartbreaking ;~;
who's the man?? was it Eunhyuk or did you purposely make it vague??
won't it be great if you make some flashbacks for sequel? :3 *bats eyelashes*

[keiiru]

ooh thanks for reading !!
my journal has gone dead except for me reading other people's story and commenting on it :)
so i'm honoured that you read it !!
i'm a shipper of hyohyuk and many others like doohyo, hyonew etc ..
and we all know the story of hyoyeon's crush
so i kinda made a story from there .. it feels like a fail though :(

i will try to make a sequel for it if i could :)
but my ideas are mostly from my real experience and what i read on the artists so yeah
anyways, i'll try !! thanks for reading :D