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[fic] Unimportant - Uruha x Ruki

Mar 31, 2010 09:47

Title: Unimportant
Chapter: 1/1
Author: keimaxwell
Genre: drama?
Warnings: none
Rating: PG
Pairing: Uruha x Ruki, Uruha x ?
Synopsis: Uruha has a crush, but will the feelings be returned?
Comment: This is actually something pretty personal. I wrote it a month ago, but only now I'm thinking it's okay to post it.

( Unimportant )

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Comments 12

narnendil March 31 2010, 18:57:56 UTC

yes I also think it's for the better.. then ruki can have reita ^_^
well written!

keimaxwell March 31 2010, 19:04:15 UTC

Ahahaha~ that's one way to think of it, too! xD
Thank you for commenting!

dearswindler March 31 2010, 23:30:35 UTC

Aww, the end is so nice. Glad to see things worked out for Uruha :D

keimaxwell April 1 2010, 17:35:39 UTC

Yes~ he deserved to have somebody. ^^
Thanks for commenting!

pandesal_luv April 1 2010, 01:56:05 UTC

This fic really touched me. I know how Uru feels...*sigh* (;_____;)

And I love the ending. Awesomely sweet and it made me realize just that. Some things are for the better and that it'll get better in time. :)

Thanks for this! Made me thoughtful. ^^

keimaxwell April 1 2010, 17:36:58 UTC

*nods* I've been in the same situation as Uruha, so... *shrugs* But sometimes you really need those kind of things to happen to see that it might be for the better. ^^
Thank you for commenting!

merumaru April 1 2010, 18:19:02 UTC

im glad that uruha had let it dropped and known that its for the better

keimaxwell April 2 2010, 10:07:09 UTC

Yeah. Some things are not worth struggling for.
Thanks for commenting!

kawasakininja April 6 2010, 19:08:02 UTC

I enjoyed the beginning, your way of portraying Uruha as someone who wears his heart on a sleeve. It was easy to see him and Ruki acting like they did around each other. The ending felt a bit rushed, especially the part with IM. There was either too little or too much details regarding their conversation. And seeing Uruha with Aoi left me bit deflated, it almost seemed like he was just settling with him because he couldn't get Ruki and that wasn't a very happy thought for me. Oh, wait. If it is personal I hope Uruha is really happy with Aoi.

keimaxwell April 7 2010, 15:19:09 UTC

Thank you very much for your comment. I guess you have a point and it is a bit rushed, but that was caused by my own emotions with this. And to be honest, I don't have the heart to change much about this piece when it was written based on those emotions. Wouldn't make any sense to me.
Hmm, I can see what you mean about Uruha and Aoi, though it was not meant like that at all. It means that he is honestly happy to be with Aoi rather than Ruki, who was blocking him out, kind of. Does that make sense? *laughs* (Note: English is not my mother tongue! xD)
And eeerm~ he was happy. >>" But that's another story - and shall never be told the way this was. |D