MatsuJun Fanfic 1: Chapter 12

[keira_aoi]

FANFIC CHALLENGE FROM AMETHYST-CHAN (check out fanfic tag to see details)

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Author’s Notes:

This is one of the scariest chapters I’ve ever written, it’s almost on equal difficulty level with the NC-17 chapter.... I’ve never ended a story so I feel like whatever I write, I’m gonna blotch this up...

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Comments

[metufanippon]

eehhhhhhhhh?? i can't believe this is the end....
but it was a really sweet and romantic ending, omedetou omedetou for that!!!!^^ i can really imagine how hard it is to end a story, even to make up the next chapter and so, that's why u did a great job, considering this is the first one of yours with an ending,ne^^ actually i'm also trying to write something,and have already written pieces,but it's not connected in an order u know,it's really difficult!!! but i thought i could post a one-shot or something...booooooo....we'll see^^
going to read ur other fic ^^

[keira_aoi]

Yey! Glad you liked the ending... Writing is so hard, ne? But then so fun as well... Thanks so much for supporting this fic, and hopefully you'll like others that I write as well...

We need more fics in the comm! So ganbatte on your own!!! And it's a one-shot? Ooooh!!! (eagerly awaits it)... ♥

[metufanippon]

it's actually the beginning of a fic,but as i couldn't write the continuation but other parts, it's not connected story at the moment,so i thought maybe i should post it as a one-shot and look how people will react , so don't expect too much ne^^

[keira_aoi]

Ah, so you'll start it as a one-shot and then gradually turn it into a continuation fic? Hey, can I ask.....does it star our ichiban with an original character or with member pairing?

^__^

[elendiliel]

Ahh the end...but it was good! I'm glad it was a happy ending! <3 Can't wait to read your next one!

[keira_aoi]

Hug!!! Thanks a lot!

I just have to ask... at around what part did you think that the ending became obvious.... just curious....

[elendiliel]

“I think I’ve been going a little crazy for the last hour or so.”

Right about there...the ending became obvious for me...although I had a feeling in the last chapter that it was going to still end okay (simply because I always hope for happy endings). :P

And I'm glad my mantra has been working for you, and for others!! :)

[keira_aoi]

Thanks so much for this feedback! I've been trying to avoid words that would give it away too soon... I actually only decided on the ending when I wrote the last chapter... 'coz it seemed like a goodbye would work really well also. ^__^

Hmmm... maybe I shouldn't have used that line... hehe... anyway, I hope I improve in my next fic, especially in writing endings.

Thanks for the mantra! It's sort of become mine as well... although the temptation to procrastinate or get depressed over my to-do list is still very strong, lol...

[matsumara]

*finished* ...

speechless. OMG Keira-san you should submit this somewhere and it'll really win! this was by far one of the most "OMG - this - is - so - Jun" series fic i've read!..
i love it! Omedetou for this wonderful fic! and i'm looking forward in reading your other works of art!

i really hope i can fix up the one im writing right now... for some reason, i can't put to words the plot i have in mind..*cries* haha... oh well..

anyway... thanks again for this wonderful story.. i know its fictional but i really helped me love my ichiban a whole lot more!!

keep up the arashi spirit!!

and goodluck on your next writing project

*hugs* matsumara desu

[keira_aoi]

Arigatou gozaimasu!!!!

I love that you said this fic is "so Jun..." It was really so hard to put him in character because, well... he's Jun, lol... so I'm glad and relieved!!! But even up to now, I still think I didn't get it right... hahaha...

You know, I was mulling over what you said that I should submit this somewhere and that I would win... I sort of blushed and kept reading that sentence over and over again... hahahaha.... But seriously, I have a long way to go... and if there are any writing competitions out there, well, I'm not really good with prompts...

Thanks for the support! And I'm thankful that you got to love Jun more because of this story...

By the way, is the story you're working on the continuation to the one-shot you posted before? Gomen, I saw it but just sort of skimmed it... (will seek to read it over the weekend...)

[matsumara]

well not really... but i still used the same name for the girl... i intended to do the story of what happened before the storyline of the oneshot but... i can't decide... so that's typically my dilemma... *sigh*

yoroshiku ne!

[plum_blossoms]

Ah~ Last chapter! I was worried it was going to be a sad ending, but it wasn't and it's so sweet~ T_T I'm glad she didn't break up with him LOL I can't wait to read more wonderful stories from you! ♥

[keira_aoi]

Thanks so much!!! It was really tough to write a happy ending especially because I really felt that the girl was going to leave him... I'm so happy that you enjoyed reading my fic and I plan to write more... hahaha... XD

[hutmahbut]

This fanfic was so good! And I think that the ending was perfect! I love the way you write! I cant wait for the next one ^__^

[keira_aoi]

I can't say thank you enough... And I'm just so 'in awe' over your words that the ending was perfect... (makes me all giddy with triumph...) XD