Arashi Fanfic 2: "Kagami" --- Chapter 1

Mar 16, 2009 10:23


Title: Kagami (The Mirror)

Pairing:  I’m still feeling this part out... so I’m leaving it blank for now.

Disclaimer: A fanfiction on Arashi-sama.

Rating: No idea yet for the rating, but for now, let’s leave it at PG to PG-13.

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mishiness March 16 2009, 02:57:07 UTC
This is going to be so much F-U-N! Seriously! I can't wait for the next chapter already! Jun loves a challenge and this woman is going to bring it! Now, I wonder who she will end up with!!! Damn! And this is only Chapter I!!! Write FASTER!!! LOL!

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keira_aoi March 16 2009, 03:41:55 UTC
Hehe, I already have Chapter 2 lined up in my head... But since I'm back home, work comes first... Hey, did you find the interview to be okay? I've only seen a few News Zero clips and I'm not sure if I got this right...

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Amethyst-chan...mou... anonymous March 16 2009, 13:55:00 UTC
As I texted you earlier, the female screams !YOU! and it was beautifully written. It seems Jun really can't take it if there is one thing that he can't do or can't be. Reminds me of someone... Osu! I am looking forward to you next chapter.

Ja ne

Your avid fan

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Re: Amethyst-chan...mou... keira_aoi March 16 2009, 17:02:36 UTC
Hahaha! XD Really? Actually, a lot of my opinions about Arashi might come out in this fic... but that remains to be seen, or rather, written, ohohoho! Hey, who does Jun remind you of? *wracks brain trying to think*

And also, when are you going to let me read your fic?!?! (stamps foot in a tantrum... mou!)

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elendiliel March 16 2009, 22:49:49 UTC
Hahaha I was just rewatching the Shukudaikun where Jun says he enjoys fights in a relationship! I wonder if that is where this will head? Or will it be Sho? Such a tough choice...hehe. :) I don't think I could choose between those two! Your writing during the News Zero segment is impressive!And I can totally picture Sho going, "EHH!?" and falling on the table at the mention of liking Ohno best. <3

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keira_aoi March 17 2009, 00:50:39 UTC
I believe I've watched all the Shukudaikun subbed eps, but I can't remember when Jun said that. Which episode is it? I'm eager to see it if I still haven't...

Actually, I read from Aibakaland in that list of qualities Jun is looking for in a potential mate/wife that he does like to argue in a relationship...

You, of course, know that Jun and Sho are my favorites, haha, so I'll be debating with myself throughout this fic. I hope I get the characterization for the both of them right. That means double research!! Wah!

I was totally unsure about the News Zero part, but I'm glad you think it was good. Yey!

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elendiliel March 17 2009, 02:08:00 UTC
I think it was episode 39? It was the one with two girls as guests. Jun and the two girls did a whole "meeting to a confession" step by step thing, and Jun's third step was to have a fight, because he said, "I love fights." LOL. So Jun! He said he liked fights because he likes to see how the girl will react...see her different expressions, so to speak. Jun is totally the type of guy who teases you just to get a reaction, like the boys who bully you because they like you. :P Ah, Jun, don't ever change.

We do share a love for Jun and Sho, ne? XD

I love that icon, btw. I think I have a picture somewhere like that...XD

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keira_aoi March 17 2009, 02:59:20 UTC
Ooh! That ep is a recent sub and its among those I've been saving to download since I came back from my stint in Manila (downloads eagerly, ohohoho!) Yes Jun, never change! If Jun is like that, how would you say Sho is when it comes to fights...? (asks for purely selfish research purposes, tee-hee)

These two guys are just so ... sigh! there are no words! Yup, I combined them in that icon... hmmm, I forget from what photo shoot/picture this is, hehe...

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metufanippon March 16 2009, 23:19:30 UTC
suge suge suge!!!!!!!
so is this fic the one for which you researched on jun's rebellious phase?????
very very interesting, i really wanna know more!!!
and i have to say,you have a huge knowlegde about economics, I didn't quite get everything on the interview part,though I graduated from an economy school *blushes* but maybe it's just that it's in english :D
anyways, waiting for more irritating jun ^^
btw, I'm very thankful to you and your fanfic,I'm so happy to have joined lj because of it,but you already know ne, I hope^^

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keira_aoi March 17 2009, 02:34:59 UTC
Yup, this is that fic I was researching for, haha. I was wondering if the interview would get too boring, but it was where I decided to put the background info for the girl so I just plodded on, hehe. And nope, don't have a huge knowledge of business or economics, just the basics to survive at work... XD

By the way, how about your own fic... how is it coming along?

I'm glad you're enjoying LJ, lots of cool stuff here and good friends to be had... XD

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metufanippon March 17 2009, 19:31:56 UTC
so it is taht one yaaaaay, can't wait to see dos jun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ano, uhhmm,...my fic?? hehehe..it's not going well^^;
I haven't written something yet, something folloving,i don't know how I should start after such a long pause,and also what should happen after that one-shot ( or before^^)...
anyways,I love Lj!!!! It's my number one source of arashi stuff

oh and too reply your other comment: don't be afraid,you'll definitely manage to write it like a novel, the beginning was very promissing...hmmm, I started an internship at a publishing house last week, maybe I should recommend you and mishi as authors ^^what u say??

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keira_aoi March 19 2009, 00:13:55 UTC
Uwah!!! Really? Wait, you're in Germany, right? Do they publish English stuff? I have some short stories from back in college... I wonder if that's good enough... I haven't been writing any original fiction lately... Feel free to ask, but be careful, I don't want to put you on the spot at your internship...

As for your fic, sit in front of your computer and type up scenes that come into your head... just type them up and work on how to connect them later... That's what I do when I'm having writer's block... the exercise helps you get back in the game and although 7 out of 10 times, I scrap what I wrote during an unproductive phase, there are some good ideas that help me build on my current story...

Hope this 2nd fic ends up to be a good one... and I love LJ, too! Yey!

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andromaeda March 16 2009, 23:47:17 UTC
Ahhh, new fic! Something to look forward to, since I've been depressed and down lately. xD You put my name in your post? I'm flattered!
Anyway!

Hmm, no pairing? This pairing is hard. It's funny how in your last fic the heroine was a fan of MatsuJun and now she isn't. Though she may not like Jun. Honestly, you know I'm completely fine with either Sho or Jun. Maybe even Nino. But mostly Sho *cough* XDD I can't wait to see what this fic is going to turn into. >D Hmm, you gonna post this on Aibakaland? This fic reeks of potential, would be a shame if you didn't get it out there.

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keira_aoi March 17 2009, 02:47:31 UTC
I think I put your name on my post before when I was researching about Johnny... I can't thank you enough for all the help you give with my fics... (hug!) And I'd also like to ask for your help in this one: as a Sho-ichibaner, please tell me if my characterization of him needs improvement... I'm gonna write him as best as I can, but I don't stalk him as much as MatsuJun so I might not get the right descriptions across... :)

Haha, I really can't decide about the pairing. And I actually don't know what's gonna happen in the succeeding chapters, but I wanted to post this already so that I could officially work on the semi-formed plot that I already had.

When I posted my first Arashi fic at Aibakaland, I think it was already 4 or 5 chapters here in LJ. And since posting there, I usually put up a chapter a day or two late because I still obsess if I made any grammar or characterization mistakes. Also, I don't have a good summary for this yet, so I'm working on that before I post at Aibakaland or at other Arashi fanfic comms...

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andromaeda March 17 2009, 11:21:19 UTC
Lemme just say now, that Sho is very much in character. ;DDD
But if he isn't I'll let you know.
Ohhh, so thats why its not there yet. I understand~
Hmm, who is Amethyst-chan's ichiban?

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keira_aoi March 17 2009, 13:08:51 UTC
Yup, 'coz Aibakaland is open to a lot of people, so sometimes I'm a bit intimidated with posting something there.

Amethyst-chan used to have Jun for her ichiban, it's funny 'coz she used to research about him all the time, and knew more about him than I did. But then she told me that Nino's sly charisma began pulling her... so now Jun is her ni-ban, hehehe... :)

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