Comments | keira_aoi: Arashi Fanfic 2: "Kagami" --- Chapter 2

keira_aoi

Arashi Fanfic 2: "Kagami" --- Chapter 2

Mar 30, 2009 02:22

Author’s Notes:

Arigatou for all those who have left comments at my LJ account. And Mishi, thanks for commenting in both Aibakaland and LJ, hehehehe, I’m still remembering the conversation we were having over that… LOL…

Something random about me… been busy with work, and I’ve been lacking energy lately, so that’s a bad combination… Why have ( Read more... )

Comments 17

andromaeda March 29 2009, 20:17:00 UTC

;O New chapter. I would like to see who this new roommate is! XD It's too bad Sho lives with his family. In all of Arashi, only Ohno & Sho live w/ their moms. Jun is taking it too seriously man, he needs to loosen up. XD I like how you showed part of Jun's thoughts during the argument. Especially when you added in the part where it said, "Trust Sho to bring everyone on the same page." XD

Ja~

andromaeda March 29 2009, 20:20:45 UTC

;O I just read the articles on Jun's "mansion". XD
Damn he has a lot of money anyway. Funny how he lives w/ Oguri Shun. XD

I wonder how they found that out anyway..did Jun mention it at some point.

AND! I'm actually the first comment. :D

keira_aoi March 30 2009, 00:35:40 UTC

Hey! Hey!

Glad you liked this chapter... and happy you liked the description for Sho... Yup, the Yama pair still live with their family. In my own culture, that's perfectly normal. We usually live with family until it's time to get married (and even then, sometimes the couple just moves to a separate unit in the same compound)... and I'm happy that those two seem so close to their own family. And that this trait of theirs manifests in how they also strengthen Arashi's bond.

And as for Jun, well, he dwells... lol... and most especially over this female lead...

I'm amazed at how fans find out personal info about their idols... but I'm glad for it. I don't really know how to describe a Japanese "mansion," but I'm thinking it will probably be something similar to the apartments in "Kimi wa Petto"...

andromaeda March 30 2009, 02:33:23 UTC

Yama Pair? xD In America, you're expected to be out of the house once you're 18, or when you've graduated college/university. But sometimes people stay w/ their parents. My mom says she'll support me only for a while after I graduate. XD

:3 This fic is promising. It'd be funny though if the lead character ditches Sho & Jun and gets with Ohno and some other guy and then Jun and Sho get together. XD My fan girl kyyyaaa ness is coming out. >.>

Fans are awesome some times..as long as they don't stalk their idols. That's scary. XD Like when all those fans used to follow Sho around in Keio. *lol*

When you typed "Kimi wa Petto", I misread it and I thought it said "Hana Kimi". I don't know if you've seen that drama but it's very interesting. :D But yeah, I'm guessing fancy apartment/luxury apartment.

I feel sick. >.<

Ja!

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animelenie March 29 2009, 20:34:53 UTC

i so laugh at this line

"and no matter his other achievements, in Arashi, Sho equals fail."

and that i think keep them mostly rooted to the ground.

thanks for another lovely chapter.

keira_aoi March 30 2009, 00:38:58 UTC

Haha, yup, I was also laughing when I typed that up...

I really like how Arashi gives the feeling of 'guys-next-door' even when they're idols... it always gives them a fresh image for me... XD

mishiness March 29 2009, 22:33:38 UTC

I saw you post on Aibakaland first so I have commented there. But since I'm here...

I see you've finally got a summary up! You know, that's one of the hardest to write? LOL. At least, for me.

At this point, I'm really curious about the lead's background i.e. family and credentials. Which is why I can't wait for her outing with Sho and college friends. I am really amazed at how you can write about her and not give her a name. I don't think I can do that.

And... credit! Hehe. I didn't get to read about that. Thanks for the info and I'll most likely use that for future fics ^_^

keira_aoi March 30 2009, 00:49:50 UTC

I read your comment at Aibakaland, you know you don't have to comment twice, right? LOL ( ... )

mishiness March 30 2009, 01:08:03 UTC

LOL, I know but I don't mind at all XP Besides, I did forget some stuff to comment about, hehehe.

I know right? I really have a hard time writing summaries. I don't want to commit to what I've written LOL. But sometimes its good. It can keep you grounded XP

LOL YAY for Shun!! I love him!! Haha! So I can't wait till he makes an appearance. I wasn't actually planning on putting Shun in until I ended up writing about the scandal with Mao XP Oh I did some research and Shun and found the Jounetsu Tairiku. You'll learn a lot about him from watching it. Here's the link: Shun. And who won't fall in love with him after watching that?!

It's sooo hard and yes very challenging! That's what makes you awesome! ^_^

Haha, I was hoping to write today but I still have the kitchen to clean and pack (dishes and stuff.) I wanna finish tonite so I don't have anything to do tomorrow after work. Lessee if I can do it! XP

keira_aoi March 30 2009, 21:18:49 UTC

Kyaaaa!!! Arigatou for the links to Shun's TV Show...! You just saved me tons of research time! Mwah!!!!!!

You know, since writing fics for Jun and Arashi, I've had a new desire to read good books to improve my writing skills. Before, it was just reading as a reader, but now I'm reading as a writer-in-training! Yey!

How's the move? Nakalipat ka na sa new apartment mo? XD

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elendiliel March 30 2009, 22:32:03 UTC

You always leave it with a good cliffhanger. :P

And Sho!fail...oh how I love it. :)

keira_aoi April 8 2009, 01:07:54 UTC

(A pretty late reply...)

Thanks for reading... (I want to update so bad but I can't find the time to actually write, hehehe)

jerseyjudy April 1 2009, 10:44:23 UTC

I know I've replied on Aibakalnd but because I used to reply here and I'm finally here... :)

So, thank you once again! You don't know how much I like to read your stories. ^__^

And I really can't imagine how can you write a fiction and never mention the leading female's name... o.O It's just woow!

And there's nothing I wouldn't gave if I could really see Jun's face when somebody told him that! XDDD And how Sho and Aiba laughing at him! XDDD So great!

keira_aoi April 8 2009, 01:13:26 UTC

(sorry for the late reply)

I've also read your comment at Aibakaland and I can't say thank you enough for supporting my stories... I can foresee that this fic is going to give me heartburn before it's over because of all the characters I have to use, hehehe...

I so want to see Jun's reaction also... and now I have to work on Chapter 3 and still handle RL stuff... Yabai! Pressure! XD