Arashi Fanfic 2: "Kagami" --- Chapter 3

[keira_aoi]

Author’s Notes:

Gomen for the late update.  Since I made an LJ post before about why I haven’t updated lately for this fic… I won’t fill these author’s notes with excuses, ohohoho…

So anyways, I’m thinking the apartment building in “Kimi wa Petto” is a sample of what Jap ‘mansions’ look like.  And I don’t really know if there’s also a

Comments

[jerseyjudy]

Well, my thoughts: YOU.ARE.AMAZING!!!
So great chapter, it's definitely worth the waiting, thank you! <3
I'm so glad I'm not the only one who loves Sho's sense of humor. ^__^

And I like her more and more. She's not afraid to tell Jun the truth, that's great. And Sayako-chan was the best! XD

And I'm hoping, too that you can post the next one soon, I'm really really curious now! :D

[keira_aoi]

I really feel bad that I got stuck in writing this story... it was tough for me deciding how to write this in a way that Sho and Jun would both come out as the lead male character.

I'm glad you like Kaichou-san (that's what I'm calling her now, hehe...) and as for Sayako-chan, I always love inserting fangirls in my fics, lol...

Kyaa..an update..

[muharami79]

Yay...an update..thank u for not forgetting ur readers b4 going on ur hiatus

Re: Kyaa..an update..

[keira_aoi]

Oooh! Yes! Sunblock wasn't actually on my list of things to bring... arigatou!

And this is actually my 2nd fic for the "nameless series" where I totally omit the lead female's name. You can check out why I'm doing this in the MatsuJun Writing Project link under the fanfic tags.

And... I like your idea of how she would be with Sho and how she would be with Jun... I'm not too sure yet if that's where I'm going with this, but it's also one of the ideas I'm mulling over...

I'm glad you like this update... And yes, I agree... I also still classify this chapter under "introduction" just because the characters aren't established all that well yet. I'm really eager to put in more developments with this fic...

Arigatou for reading and commenting!!! XD

Re: Kyaa..an update..

[muharami79]

oh my..going on a trip during summer and not bringing ur sunblock?? don't repeat my silly mistake..ha..ha..permanent sun tan..
Now that u mention it, I did remember reading ur Matsujun Writing Project before..ha..ha..silly me..again..
Does that mean there will be another chap b4 ur hiatus?? Please say yes..I'm dying to know Sho's reaction when he finds out that Jun's her neighbour..aah..let the competition begin,shall we??Sho VS Jun..Who will Kaichou choose??

[elendiliel]

Yay! I was hoping you'd get to Sho coming over to her apartment (with Jun there! dun dun dun!) but I guess I have to wait. T_T Another good chapter! Can't wait for more!! :D

[keira_aoi]

I'm currently working on Chapter 4... I hope I get to finish it soon. I ended up not posting for so long not just because of the real life stuff but also because I didn't know who I was rooting for to win the girl... hahaha...

XD

[b00kw0rm79]

This is the first time I've read one of your fanfics.
I think I started with a good one. The problem I find with some fanfics is that I end up disliking the original character.

In this case, I sat down and read all four entries in a few minutes. Your story is awesome! I like that you haven't constrained yourself to just one point of view. I like that you've kept the members public persona intact. I'm really curious about your female main character's story (I'm bad with names. Even when they're just an upward scroll away).

I can't wait to read more. :)

[keira_aoi]

Wow, thanks for reading this fic... and I'm glad you like it. It's actually the 2nd of my nameless series where I am trying to write without actually using a name for the lead character... it's sort of practice exercise for improving on my characterization...

I actually can't write an Arashi fic without using their real life personas... hehehe... but this is the first time I'm trying to write it to really coincide with the jobs/gigs that they have at the time.

So you usually end up disliking the original character? *gets scared* hahaha...

[b00kw0rm79]

No, no, no... it only happens SOMETIMES.
I think my problem is when I'm reading a fanfic about real people I get thrown off by the OC. Probably because this is someone new who I don't know anything about.

By the way, I meant to wish you a good time on your vacation. It sounds like a lot of fun. :D

[keira_aoi]

No worries... What you said about original characters throwing you off made me think more critically about my writing and my previous work, so thanks for that!

And yup, SUMMER equals the BEACH! At least for me, it does. I'm pretty excited for our outing... Thanks! And I hope the office politics at your workplace eases up and gives you room to breathe and still enjoy your job... :)