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Dealing with Reality. 5/?

Jun 05, 2010 13:05

Title: Dealing with reality. 5/?
Author: Kel_085
Pairing: Callie/Arizona
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Callie and Arizona talk after their break up and about their future in each other’s life.
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fanfic: callie/arizona

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summitsw June 5 2010, 07:23:45 UTC

Normally I'm a sucker for angst, but did you really have to hit her with a car? Nice bonding with Mark though and Cristina has a heart. I always suspected as much.

kel_085 June 5 2010, 07:41:56 UTC

Lol. Well... it got the reaction I was hoping for... so yep. :P I know shocker ay Cristina's human! :P I love a bit of Az/Mark bonding. :)

mumblingm00se June 6 2010, 00:20:50 UTC

Phew I know we all love a bit of drama but...damn did you have to? lol Quite emotionally distressing. Nicely done but I'm keeping my fingers crossed this will be fixed soon ;O)

kel_085 June 6 2010, 00:25:28 UTC

Lol. Well as I said I had no control over this one, it came right out of left field and shocked me as much as it shocked you. I'm working on fixing it as we speak. :) Hopefully today or tomorrow it'll be up... hopefully. :P

seethejoy June 6 2010, 04:07:22 UTC

Whoa. I wasn't expecting this but you handled this new side of emotional/dramatic very well!

Sometimes I can't handle this kind of storyline because it's emotional overkill...like *puke*...or it's just too dark & twisty for me. But this was a great balance of drama and emotion with the love & hope & sweetness. Great job!

Please don't leave us hanging too long, though? I liked it but that doesn't mean I'm not anxious to see what happens from here! ;)

kel_085 June 6 2010, 04:10:26 UTC

Thank for reading. :) I'm glad you liked it, I didn't know where I was going with this, it just sorta happened.

I promise I wont keep you waiting too long, I'm working on the next chapter now. :) Hopefully it'll be up in a few hours depending if my writing flows tonight. :)

funkyshaz57 June 6 2010, 08:36:15 UTC

Oh that so isn't good!!! Poor both of them!!!!! Just when they were starting to get things sorted Callie gets hurt this is so sad!!! And did i read correctly - Did Ari make a comment about having Callie's babies!!!! Please please let Callie be alright so her and Ari can work things out - I'll be waiting for an update eagerly lol!!!

kel_085 June 6 2010, 08:38:57 UTC

Holy shit, fast reader? You only just commented on chapter 4. :P And yes you're the only one that picked up on that comment. Lol. And maybe its because you just read all the chapters that you remember there hadn't actually been an agreement made. :P I'm hoping to have the next chapter up tonight at some point. :) Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment!! :D

calzonafan4eva June 6 2010, 10:25:26 UTC

Holly crap lol this story awesome!!! :) Totally can't wait for an update. I just read all 5 chapters in a row. :) I had the same reaction funkyshaz57 had about Arizona's comment about having Callie's babies lol :)

kel_085 June 6 2010, 10:27:17 UTC

Lol. I'm just watching the good wife and then I'm going to edit my chapter and post it. So give me a few hours and chapter 6 will be up. :D

I'm glad someone else picked up on that statement. Lol.

calzonafan4eva June 6 2010, 10:28:56 UTC

yay :) i can't wait....gonna read aftermath to keep me occupied lol

kel_085 June 6 2010, 10:29:40 UTC

:D Okay, you'll probably be finished them before I get the next chapter up though. :P

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