The Dance 1/1, PG-13 (Venice)

Mar 17, 2010 00:36

Title: The Dance 1/1 ( Read more... )

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pa19128 March 17 2010, 13:52:55 UTC
I was hoping you would venture into Venice territory! I hope in season 2 of Venice that we get to see some history of Gina and Ani's relationship. That scene on the bench was so beautiful and poignant. I am pulling for them to get back together, but in the meantime, Lara certainly isn't a bad distraction! I think you really get these two. Thanks for the story.

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kelinswriter March 19 2010, 06:04:36 UTC
I was hoping you would venture into Venice territory!

I don't think it lends itself to my usual epic form, but a one-shot at the close of each season is certainly a possibility.

I hope in season 2 of Venice that we get to see some history of Gina and Ani's relationship.

Me too. I would like to know what exactly happened. I suspect we're going to meet the infamous Logan fairly soon as well.

That scene on the bench was so beautiful and poignant. I am pulling for them to get back together, but in the meantime, Lara certainly isn't a bad distraction!

I really like Ani and Lara together - this could be quite the interesting triangle. And I agree, that scene on the beach was quite compelling. Like most people, I think ep 7 ranks as my favorite of the season. That chemistry is so magical.

I think you really get these two. Thanks for the story.

*whispers* I've kinda lived it... ;-) Thanks for reading!

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triggerhappy March 17 2010, 19:49:37 UTC
Well, I kind of want to give Olivia a smack for being uncooperative.
But, Ani so deserves a hug for inspiring this piece. Very cool look into Ani's state of mind.

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kelinswriter March 19 2010, 05:59:48 UTC
Well, I kind of want to give Olivia a smack for being uncooperative

She got chatty yesterday and gave me a few pages. And Natalia = well, Natalia was in QUITE the mood. ;-) It's going to be a bit yet, but not too much longer.

But, Ani so deserves a hug for inspiring this piece. Very cool look into Ani's state of mind.

She's such an interesting character - I find that I identify with her a lot. I look forward to seeing how she develops in season 2.

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kelinswriter March 19 2010, 05:56:04 UTC
Haha thanks! lol

I'm glad you enjoyed the piece.

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bsofthewest March 17 2010, 23:59:47 UTC
After a full day with the parentalunits I figured you could use an extra bit of validation....
This is a wonderful exploration. If it weren't for you, we would have no insight into these complex characters. It is saved in my Venice Mem Section for future reading. It is now part of the canon. Now go rest your soul, it probably is in turmoil. Just remember, you are valued here.

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kelinswriter March 19 2010, 05:49:53 UTC
If it weren't for you, we would have no insight into these complex characters. It is saved in my Venice Mem Section for future reading.

I'm glad you enjoyed this little character study! it's easier to do something like this in written format - a lot of this information is there in the subtext in Venice, imo.

Ani's a character with great potential. I'm looking forward to seeing what they do with her next year. And Gina is...well...an awesome mess. Gotta love that!

Thanks for reading.

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