Fic: Great Expectations (Logan/Veronica) R

[kellbelles]

Title: Great Expectations (1/1)
Author: Kelli
Pairing/Character: Logan/Veronica
Word Count: 5,214
Rating: R
Summary: Greed comes in many different flavors, but it always hurts.
Spoilers: This is a missing scene from 2.13('Ain't No Magic Mountain High Enough), so everything up to that.
Warnings: The f-word flies around a few times, and there's some

Comments

[anonymous]

This is beautiful. Absolutely stunning, you did a great job.

[afteriwake]

This is wonderful. Absolutely brilliant. You really did a great job capturing both Logan and Veronica.

[skk670]

My favorite part:

In her quest for answers she wounded a lot of people along the way, forgetting the difference two little words can sometimes make. They were insignificant in her life, so she underestimated the value they held for some.

She got greedy, withholding forgiveness, keeping apologies to herself, not really knowing who or what she was saving it all for.

In some places the characterization felt off - Veronica turns away one second then turns back, Logan and Veronica holding hands in the car while still angry at each other, little things like that. But in a odd way, it works. It shows how confused their emotions are concerning each other.

I like the idea of this story and how you present it. Keep up the good work.

[anonymous]

This was great. I loved it. Wonderfully done!

[gigglynell]

Fantastic job Kel!! You know how much I love this.

You can hear words, but can you touch them?

Because there were so many things said, she’d like to take back, reach out, grab and shove back in.

And there were some things she wished she could say, pull from her heart and put into her mouth, make them come out.

I am just in love with this little section, it just seems so very Veronica. There are so many more parts I am in love with but I need to get to bed now. I can't wait to see what you come up with for your next VM fic. Yes that is right you must write more because I said :)