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kellyj63081

Make My Heart a Better Place (Part 5)

Aug 22, 2009 16:31

Make My Heart a Better Place
Part 5 of ???
Pairing: Godric/Eric
Warnings: Slash, Some Fluff, May Get a Little Dark Eventually (my work sometimes does), and the fact that I'm going to take quite a few liberties with Godric and Eric's respective histories. Fair Warning
Disclaimer: They're not mine. If they were? Canon would say that Godric is still ( Read more... )

slash, godric, make my heart a better place, fanfiction, eric

Comments 19

dewriddy August 23 2009, 20:06:28 UTC

Soon, they'd get him alone.

Soon.

Soon What?
Do not tell me that your going to kill Godric, I may just kill someone.

dewriddy August 23 2009, 20:08:20 UTC

Not that I didn't love this chapter, because I do.

kellyj63081 August 23 2009, 21:12:22 UTC

Hee. Cliffhangers. :D

linndechir August 23 2009, 22:40:49 UTC

I LOVE this story. It's so beautifully written, and the characterisation is amazing, and Godric is adorable, and Godric and Eric together are even more adorable, and and and it's perfect! More! Now!

jadejester7 August 23 2009, 23:40:36 UTC

"He's not 'slight' the way most teenagers are these days. He's not long-limbed and lanky. He's just...a smaller version of what he would have been. Humans have evolved. Begun to live longer. Godric's living days are long behind him, and he was a man then. Not a boy."

I like this point, it just emphasizes the strength expected of him in the civilization that he came from. Imagine how he must view the teenagers of the modern world, envisioning how long they would survive in his world.

awesome fic btw. :D

septemberoses August 26 2009, 14:56:38 UTC

over here in ur journal telling you I am waiting impatiently for the next chapter of this! don't think we're letting you off the hook! ;-)