Comments | kellyjelly77: Untitled Ficlet, Involving a Baseball

kellyjelly77

Untitled Ficlet, Involving a Baseball

Jan 27, 2005 00:27

‘I had a dream last night.’ Draco is startled by Potter’s voice behind him, and he turns without thinking. There is no chance that Potter would ever address Draco, of all people, with his dreams, and Draco doesn’t know exactly why he turns. But Potter is looking straight at him. ‘You were in it.’

For a minute Draco wonders if this is one ( Read more... )

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remipunx January 27 2005, 18:31:48 UTC

I like it, there is great plot here. I am going to go through it tonight and make notes on stuff, but I think that you could really make something out of this. It might need more length, is that okay?

kellyjelly77 January 27 2005, 18:53:39 UTC

Sure. I kind of wrote it when I was hopped up on cough syrup, but if you think it's worth re-working I'm all for it. Not like I have much else to do. Thanks for looking it over.

remipunx February 9 2005, 07:48:29 UTC

So did you post this anywhere else? You should post the final here, so that I can put it on my rec list. Oh, and I meant to ask, did you come up with a title yet?

kellyjelly77 February 9 2005, 08:14:33 UTC

Ack, no and no. I'm a lazy bitch here lately. But I will, I will. Today. NOW! And I don't have a title. I don't know what to call it...hmmm.

I think, since it's only 606 words, just above 'drabble' status, I'll just call it, 'Involving a Baseball', because the title's honestly the boring part. So, yes, off I go to post it.