Lucius/Hermione, "The Darkness Pulls at You with Its Mystery", nc-17

Aug 30, 2009 16:59

Title; The Darkness Pulls at You with Its Mystery
Characters; Lucius/Hermione
Rating; NC-17
Words; 2,153
Summary; Hermione never really understood Lucius' interest in her, until now.
Disclaimer; I don't own them, I just like playing with them.
A/N; It's been a long time since I wrote Harry Potter fics, so be gentle.

He was staring; had been for the entire evening. )

fic: harry potter, lucius/hermione

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theplotfiles August 30 2009, 16:39:10 UTC
Gah.

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kellysparrow August 31 2009, 17:09:31 UTC
LOL, thanks ;)

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thewickedquill August 30 2009, 23:30:25 UTC
Niiiiice. Wouldn't hurt to have a bit more edge - this is Malfoy, right? But still enjoyable! Thanks for sharing :)
And TBC should not be a question but rather a statement.
FYI, I wanted to offer an opinion on your 'comment' option...
Take the easy way out? Since when is it the easy way to say something? Isn't it easier to bypass it all together? (Selfish, perhaps, but easier!) :P
Lol. Ignore me.

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kellysparrow August 31 2009, 16:27:07 UTC
I know there's a bit too little edge, especially since it's Malfoy, but I actually intended to write something more as him dominating her a lot more instead of more or less charming her into doing this. However, this is Malfoy and I don't think I can let this one go without writing at least a second part, so I'll make it a bit more complex (A)

I had never thought of it that way, to be quite honest. It's just a line from my favourite song, so that's what I chose it :)

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rodasons September 1 2009, 21:40:34 UTC
TBC?

YEEEESSSS, Pleeeassseeeee!!!

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kellysparrow September 1 2009, 21:59:37 UTC
Happy to hear that, thank you!!! I will be continuing this, I'm already writing part 2 :D

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blacksquirrel September 3 2009, 04:49:46 UTC
Very nicely done

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kellysparrow September 13 2009, 11:11:51 UTC
Apologies for the late reply, but thank you very much!

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ebonyeyez1 September 23 2009, 22:09:32 UTC
Please continue!

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