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[kenakeri]

Kantor looked round at the scared little faces crammed in his corner of the Great Hall. Outside, the wind snarled its fury and the sea roared in response. The other adults were busy, making sure their refuge was safe against the storm, but with a missing arm and leg, he couldn’t do much more than ensure that the little ones didn’t get underfoot

Comments

[jem0000000]

Awww, poor dude. I liked this.

[roina_arwen]

Very creative, and despite the large cast of characters, very well told.

[eternal_ot]

Excellent work! Enjoyed the creation..:) Good job!

[karmasoup]

You’ve crafted creation mythos for an entirely imagined world? That takes some intense skill! This has all the best elements of similar tales from around our world, an expertly woven tapestry.

[kenakeri]

Thank you :)

I do this for most of my story settings, depending on the level of involvement the gods have with the day to day lives of the mortals.

NK Jemisin's The Hundred Thousand Kingdoms is a good example of how it's supposed to be done :)

[tsuki_no_bara]

i was totally not expecting that ending! i like it!

[kenakeri]

Thank you :)