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Ties That Bind (Chapter 15: Ghosts of Miami)

Oct 05, 2009 21:14

Ties That Bind (Chapter 15: Ghosts of Miami)
author: Ken and Barbie
pairing: Dexter/"Rudy" (Slash), Referenced Dexter/Rita and Brian/Deb (Though not the focus of the story.)
rating: Mature / Adult / NC-17 (For possible adult situations, sexual content, slash, language, and gore.)
summary: An Alternate-Ending continuation of the Showtime Adaptation of ( Read more... )

Comments 17

missaffliction October 7 2009, 05:57:37 UTC

Oh my god, this is amazing :D
I'm so happy to see these updates! So many things were just PERFECT!
I started by re-reading chapter 11, which had been the last I read, and I got lost in how perfect it was again. And everything really just seemed to flow after.

I really liked this one part, I think it was last chapter, where Dexter understands why Brian is so bitter with Harry, because he realizes he didn't have to lose both his mother and his brother and he did. WOW.

Also, I loved this line, "-this second attempt to marry yesterday and today." It really shows how strongly Brian needs to reconnect, and he spent his ENTIRE life away waiting for it.

I love the events that lead to them coming back home. The way they woke up and Deb showed up, causing Brian to lose it and Dexter to truly feel something. WOWWW.

This is brilliant :D I'm sooooo glad you guys wrote this story. It's amazing :).

<33333333333333

kenandbarbie October 8 2009, 01:45:57 UTC

Everything is done but the very last chapter, which I'm going to update up to that point this weekend.

It ends in tears and blood and all sorts of stuff.

Thank yo so much for the full feed back. It's nice to hear this stuff. The whole story was done over AOL Instant Messenger back and forth over a series of like. . .years.

I had no idea it was going to end up being this long, or wordy, but honestly I could just write for hours trying to explain fully why they are both he way they are, and what would have had to happen closure-wise for them to co-exist. Also Dexter slash. . . has to be really wordy, and explained, and set up in order to work, because I think it'd take a lot of coercing for him to go down that rad.

We actually have mild plans for a sequel, but it depends on what happens in the last chapter. .OOooohh. Soooon!

briandjusforeve October 14 2009, 00:02:28 UTC

OMG....THANK YOU for finishing up this story, I have been following it, praying for updates, and just as I'm about to give up, you guys start posting again! WOOT! Anyways thanks for posting! Keep up the good work.

b_and_b October 16 2009, 09:44:41 UTC

I'm totally speechless besides saying that I WANT ANOTHER CHAPTER AAAAAAAAAA
i love you guys soooo much. Thank you for writing this delicious bit of sin ♥

homicidalslayer October 21 2009, 17:44:02 UTC

I love this story. Especially since it's the only multi-chapter Dexter/Brian fic I've had the pleasure to come across. Furthermore, it keeps the crazy without losing the sweetness, which is exactly why we all watch Dexter in the first place.

Nice Job, guys.

Genius ely_wa October 25 2009, 06:22:02 UTC

Honestly, this story is absolute genius ( ... )