Brigits_Flame February Entry 03 - Harmony

[kenderlord]

They’re a lot smarter than I think they are.  They always hide in the most inconvenient places, for one.  On the rooftops of churches, where the gargoyles and grotesques are.  Like to confuse a girl, I tell you.  You can’t see them on a winter’s night up there unless you tag them with a laser and watch them refract like a cut gem.  For another

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[harlotbug3]

Thumbs up. A few tweaks I'd twist, but nothing substantial I'd changed.

[kenderlord]

! well damn!

Thanks a lot!

(That icon is hella gross.)

-D

[cedarwolfsinger]

Interesting take on the prompt. Glass demons who eat babies... scary bit there. Well written -- good luck with it.

[taste_is_sweet]

Wild. How do you do keep doing that? Seriously.

[kenderlord]

Ahahaha I couldn't even tell you. It must look like I snort heroin off the backs of psychedelic frogs, but I don't.

Anymore.
-D

[jamais_toujours]

I love it, as usual. The drifting off topic about Angelina Jolie and Paul Simon made me giggle, and the idea of glass lizards who eat babies freaked me out and made me smile at the same time. Good luck this week :).

[kenderlord]

Hee! Thanks, Becca.

I look back at these sometimes and wonder if I'm a complete lunatic. But then I sigh, happily, and reason that it cannot be so if I'm asking myself that question.
-D

[13_stories]

I am one of your editors for this week. I have to apologize. I have been in late meetings every day. I'm going to give you my overall impression and then later this evening, I will come back and give you a detailed edit.

I read the story on my phone on the way to work yesterday. I think it is an imaginative take on the prompt. It is also quite well written. I did find some things that I would suggest changing, but there isn't anything seriously wrong with it.

Once my husband goes to bed, I will post another comment with the suggestions.

Thank you for sharing this cleverly conceived story.

[kenderlord]

Please, take your time! It's totally fine.

-D