I don't get a lot of response these days, so thanks a lot. You're kind of right. It's not a specific woman. It's more about my frustrations with women that don't let you "in" despite how beautiful they let you see them to be. For them, it seems enough that they let you see they are a great person, but they don't suffer closeness easily. Or something.
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You really are a poet.
I LOVE this.
It comes somewhat natural to you, eh?
Keep writing. This is honest, real poetry. I love it. Only the smartest artists in the world can "get" poetry. And you got it. 'Tis absolutely lovely.
I love the way you've left room for interpretation. In my mind, the rose is a chick...
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For them, it seems enough that they let you see they are a great person, but they don't suffer closeness easily. Or something.
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