Skinny Latte

[keogh123]

Her trembling fingers are rippling the clouds in her latte.
She's such a distracted little thing: biting her fingers so hard the nail polish is staining her teeth.
"Come on, Kit." her mind urges/ "You can do this. He'll be here. Calm down. Drink the coffee."
It took eight fingers to tame the styrofoam earthquake and another two to help raise it to her

Comments

[aanallein]

i like it except for "in that voice that melts her flesh"...i honestly don't really like the imagery there and even if i did i think it's out of place in that sentence. just my opinion tho