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Jan 20, 2014 13:56

Title: The Day the Devil Rides a Pale Horse
Author: keppiehed
Word Count: 1732
Prompt: “death”
A/N: Written for musemuggers Challenge #533, Option #1. This is the ongoing saga of the Devil and his sidekick, Smee.

The Day the Devil Rides a Pale Horse )

prompt: death, musemuggers

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rubyelf January 20 2014, 19:28:33 UTC
The Devil is not a very good listener.

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keppiehed January 20 2014, 19:31:23 UTC
He is not. Sadly, I fear he may be my alter ego.

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obleighvious January 20 2014, 23:25:01 UTC
Oh, that Devil! ;)

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keppiehed January 20 2014, 23:27:06 UTC
I was a little lost on this one, I admit. I blame the kids--why are they always home??? But Charles was like "hey, throw some zombies in there!" and I was like *shrug* so that's how that happened.

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obleighvious January 21 2014, 02:18:26 UTC
Oh, I thought that was the clever part! I'm all "aaah, that's why you don't want to ride Death's horse!" You and your children make a good team :)

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keppiehed January 21 2014, 13:29:44 UTC
Charles cracks me up. It was not a quick outline of plot detail: this was a fifteen minute affair, with sound effects and a full-drawn anime panel to get the point across. That kid's got 99 problems, but lack of imagination ain't one of 'em. ;)

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bardiphouka January 24 2014, 00:02:44 UTC
It is ever so visual an episode. I can imagine the Devil and Smeeas a quite popular BBC programme.

I also might add that if I were drinking at the time, you might have won the snortish contest when I read the zombie explanation

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keppiehed January 27 2014, 12:56:02 UTC
It's interesting that you are thinking that it would be good for TV. I wonder who would play the parts?

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bardiphouka January 27 2014, 14:19:16 UTC
Fry and Laurie perhaps?

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keppiehed January 27 2014, 14:22:53 UTC
ugh, no way!

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keppiehed February 5 2014, 18:37:42 UTC
Thora! It's so wonderful to see you here on LJ! Thank you so much for stopping by to read one of my stories. This is part of a longer set of tales about these two; I hope that it didn't lose the humor being in the middle of a series.

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