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kept_them_safe

The Gospel of Guys - Chapter 239

Nov 05, 2011 08:24

"Now, listen carefully boy, 'cause Reverend Shane knows what he's talkin' about. He preaches about the ways of women and how men need to deal with them in order of gettin' some well deserved peace of mind. Thanks to his advice you managed to score, so, keep quiet and give the Word a little respect here, bud."

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reverend shane, carl, lori, jessika, the gospel of guys, fanfiction, rick

Comments 5

ooc officr_friendly November 5 2011, 12:27:47 UTC

So, you know I'm just going to bug you now until you let the Good Reverend here preach it true to Rick for yours truly, don't you.

I love the voice you've got here so much! Seriously, I cannot fault it in the slightest. The man is settled firmly in your head and don't you deny it <3

Not so ooc... kept_them_safe November 5 2011, 12:32:04 UTC

You want someone to finally make a man out of Rick? 'Cause seriouly, ma'am, I've been tryin'. Strugglin! Real hard since we were both in high school. One hell of a job, I'm tellin' ya!

Back to ooc!

Seriously, thank you so much, hon!! I always doubt his voice so damn much! XD But I was kinda pleased with how this sounded and your reassurance is a hell of a lot of encouragement, really! <3<3<3

OOC digi_punk November 5 2011, 13:18:22 UTC

Oh sure, reply to my "amazing post" with something even more incredible. See if I care. XD ( ... )

Re: OOC kept_them_safe November 5 2011, 13:49:28 UTC

LMAO! Seriously, no such thing. I really loved seeing your POV on their relationship! <3

Thank you so, so, so very much for the feedback. Like I said to Rick's mun, Shane is a character pretty complex and I'm never sure if I'm getting his voice right or not! But yeah, that's pretty much how I like to play him, the adorabe, caring mysoginist pig! X3

I really enjoy the layers you've given to Jess, her background is so believable and that's probably what makes her a real great character and so easy to blend with the canon.

I'm really looking forward to see where canon goes and how we can keep the RP one blending in. See if they can both mature a bit really and balance their flaws.

Re: OOC digi_punk November 5 2011, 14:12:23 UTC

Yeah but I don't have Rev. Shane in my back pocket. I love that you wrote it that way. It felt like past!Shane was foreshadowing present!Shane's current pickle ( ... )