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verucasalt123 June 28 2012, 01:48:31 UTC
I don't even think I've recovered enough to leave a coherent comment. This story was amazing, you created a really scary world that honestly had me worried several times while reading, and then you gave our boys a nice happy ending. Absolutely fantastic. Thanks so much for sharing this.

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kerfuffling June 28 2012, 10:31:49 UTC
omigosh, thank you so much! i'm so glad the zombie-world worked for you...it's a little hard to create it without having, you know, visual effects haha. so i'm really happy it worked for you!!

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marlivia June 28 2012, 06:00:58 UTC
Aw i love it, poor Sammy, poor Dean and poor baby. amazing work ;)

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kerfuffling June 28 2012, 10:32:17 UTC
yes, i did put them through the wringer, didn't i? but i'll always make it work out in the end. thank you so much for reading!

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bellevue June 28 2012, 08:17:39 UTC
Fantastic job with this! I found the summary so intriguing but wasn't really sure what to expect, and I'm so glad I read it. I loved all the various settings you have the boys going through; it really helped highlight the horrifying state of the world by having them spend time with survivors in that unsettling regime, and also on their own facing zombies and leviathans (and all the downtime, trapped in their own heads!) The altered reproductive situation in this world was also really fascinating and added a totally new layer of horror to what fertiles in general and Sam in particular were facing. Sam's reaction to his impregnation was completely understandable and while sad, I love that you didn't shy away from the body-horror aspect of someone who never thought they could become pregnant having a "parasite" growing inside them. Plus it really amped up the protective!Dean, and I especially loved the scenes where Dean tries to convince Sam to at least try loving their baby, and that whatever happened they'd deal with it together. ♥ ( ... )

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kerfuffling June 28 2012, 10:34:43 UTC
aww, thank you SO much! i'm really happy my twist on fertiles worked for you...i was afraid i wasn't providing enough detail! and it was really important to me to have sam react in a realistic way to finding out he could get pregnant, so again, i'm really happy that resonated as well :D

and yes, the art is wonderful, isn't it :) i was so lucky to get such an amazing artist.

again, thanks for the lovely comment! my smile is so big right now :)

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kerfuffling June 28 2012, 22:26:40 UTC
i had a lot of fun writing the general, mostly because he was so evil :) i'm twisted.

thank you for reading and for the comment!!

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masja_17 June 29 2012, 21:05:44 UTC
I think you totally got the boyz right! Awesome! Not usually fond of mpreg, but thought it was ok here.

<3

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kerfuffling June 29 2012, 22:29:06 UTC
oh, thank you! i'm glad it worked for you and that the mpreg wasn't too squicky :)

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