I Need Feedback...

[kermit716]

Hey. I know I just wrote a little while ago, but I'm writing an English essay and I need feedback on how I can make it better. I'll copy and paste it

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[anonymous]

omg it is so good!!!!!!
can i b uy it from u? jkjk
I AM SO FAMOUS NOW IM IN YOUR REPORT YOU POPULAR BITCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I luv you hunny<33<33
xox fiona

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[kermit716]

Dude...yours actually turned out better than mine in the end!!! =D Heehee!

<3

Haley

[kermit716]

Hey, thanx for the *wOnDeRfUl* comment =) God I feel so damn loved!!!! Hahaha... so have you started writing yours? Once you're done, post it on your journal and I'll comment. Yay!!!

XoX --> Your Wife a.k.a. Kermit a.k.a. Hayli