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kerrie22

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Nov 20, 2008 19:00

Okay so I finally started my rant about Al's class. Here it is for all you people who actually like and/or are good at writing.

( Chopchop )

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pulabean November 22 2008, 02:30:59 UTC

Here're some of my fairly concrete suggestions (as opposed to general comments.. which I'm not so good at). Take what you will ( ... )

pulabean November 22 2008, 02:31:21 UTC

Today it was announced that if we didn't have Chapters 1-16 completed and printed, we could possibly fail. I think the fact that most of us taught ourselves and our classmates a program and have designed multiple versions of our webpages is pretty good considering the lack of direction we've received from our leader ( ... )

pulabean November 22 2008, 02:34:05 UTC

I would also suggest that if you can cut it down any more, you should. People have short attention spans, so the less time it takes for you to get your point across, the better. Also, the paragraph breaks were screwed up with the copy/paste, so you could probably have fewer than I put.

<3<3<3 Great jorb!

kerrie22 November 22 2008, 20:47:25 UTC

Thanks Paula... I actually ended up adding some stuff. I read online that keeping it somewhat casual can be more effective b/c it shows you're not angry and have some connection to the problem or something but I don't know. Also I'm sending this to Louise who said to write as many examples as I could, so I'm working on that too. But thanks for going through it all, that's awesome o-o!
(I also got a couple other people to write something sooo yay.)