PoT Fic: Rising [R; Tezuka/Ryoma]

Sep 10, 2006 02:15

Title: Rising
Author: Ria
Disclaimer: Not mine - all Konomi's.
Rating: Hard R
Pairing: Tezuka/Ryoma
Warning: sex
Words: ~7,700
Summary: Tezuka has always thought he knows how the routine goes. But it turns out that Ryoma can still surprise him.
Author's Notes: Written for pillarchallenge's Plane challenge. Much thanks to cimorene111 for beta-ing this. <3 I hope you ( Read more... )

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weirdlyyours September 10 2006, 02:12:56 UTC
AS;DLFKJ OH MY GOD. Not sure where to start but: I love the way that Tezuka feels like all is right in the world when he sees that Ryoma is participating. I don't think they've ever considered tennis without the other and a;ldfkj so cute. And then "worst kept secret" and haha apparently not because the journalists didn't seem to know at all, though you'd think that enough of them would stalk the two of them to find out pretty quickly.

I kind of expected the Regulars to pop out and Taka-san to wave a "Tezuka/Ryoma, FIGHT-O" flag in the middle of the press conference. And Ryoma who wants to go back to Japan even with all that chaos for Karupin. ♥!!!

This is so much awesome, and I'm just sitting here smiling at the end of it. ♥♥♥♥♥

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kessie October 23 2006, 12:48:18 UTC
Thank you! Yes, I definitely think they can't consider tennis without each other now; they're each other's rivals, in a way, except neither would mind losing to the other once it was a game worthwhile. ♥ Anyone else, though, is fair game. :D Well, I think Atobe and Fuji might have had a hand in the journalists not particularly finding out, and I think Tezuka most likely would have cautioned Ryoma into keeping their relationship quiet.

I did consider putting in the rest of the Regulars, and then decided maybe having them arrive for this one game might have been a little implausible (but it's Tenipuri, so...). Thank you so much for reading!

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kessie October 23 2006, 12:50:17 UTC
No worries; any feedback is better than none at all! One thing I loved about writing this fic is definitely some of the images that popped into my head as I was writing it, and that was one of them. And I love Atobe even if he keeps being unrequited in everything I write him in. Thank you!

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reposoir September 10 2006, 03:05:27 UTC
Hee! I admit I haven't really read any Pillar Pair in a long while, so reading yours after said time was really a wonderful read.

I still want to see Tezuka and Ryoma drunk, together, though. I LOVED the line about them both being rather, ah, weak drunks. Because that just shows, to me, how perfectly your characterizations of them could mesh with the canon. It just works.

Thank you so much for sharing this with us, Ria. :D

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kessie October 23 2006, 12:52:03 UTC
Thank you for reading. ♥

I will write them absolutely pissed together at some point; I swear it. It would be utterly priceless. :D

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bookshop September 10 2006, 03:18:08 UTC
RIA.

I really, just right at this second, don't have words. I really don't. Just love, for you, and them. So so much love.

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kessie October 23 2006, 12:50:46 UTC
Thank you so much. ♥ ♥ ♥

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seii_ryu September 10 2006, 03:25:28 UTC
This was the perfect first-back-to-Tenipuri fic! I can't tell you how great this fic was. Your Atobe rocks! Hannah was great too... and I love how this is centred around Tezuka and Ryoma, not with half of Seigaku interfering.

The combo of Fuji and Atobe is just too scary to contemplate though.

Cheers!

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kessie October 23 2006, 12:55:35 UTC
Hannah is going to pop up in the Epic later on (which, yes, I still am writing, I swear), but I couldn't resist putting her in this as well. Well, logically, I couldn't have most of Seiagku there since they're all adults (apparently, hahaha) and have jobs and everything. I tried to make it just a little realistic, as much as anything involving Tenipuri can be, anyway.

It really is a frightening combination.

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seii_ryu October 24 2006, 01:00:30 UTC
EPIC! I ♥ EPICS. ESP TEZURYO EPICS.

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