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30_kisses: Theme #26: if only I could make you mine

Sep 21, 2006 14:52

Theme #26: if only I could make you mine
Note: continuation of Photographs aka. salaryman!Tezuka universe. :( (1,155 words)

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kessie September 21 2006, 14:27:37 UTC

Sometimes I can't believe I gave Tezuka a wife. D:

But thank you! ♥ This one was very hard to write (it's been stuck in my notebook for about two months), as I didn't want it to turn into a horrible cliche where Tezukw would suddenly realise he was in love with Ryoma the minute his wife died. And Ryoma was jealous, very much so, but he was also so conflicted because he really wanted Tezuka to be happy. :(

I think this is the one 'verse I've written where there will never be a proper happy ending. It's very strange. :|

spurious September 21 2006, 15:31:11 UTC

Ohhhh. :(((( I need a tissue now.

kessie September 21 2006, 15:43:27 UTC

*hands you box* I know. :( This whole universe is torture for me. I'm going to go off and write fluff now. Lots of it. :(((

weirdlyyours September 22 2006, 00:33:20 UTC

My heart breaks for the both of them. :((

kessie September 22 2006, 00:36:40 UTC

Yes. :(((

I think I have one last story set in this universe. Oh no. *cries*

char_maine September 27 2006, 04:19:01 UTC

Hi, I'm new to this fandom but had already read a few of your stories on the pillarchallenge community and I simply love your characterization of tezuka and ryoma. :)

Look forward to reading the rest of your writings and your new works.

kessie October 23 2006, 13:43:10 UTC

Thank you for reading! I'm glad you're enjoying them! :)

shushesyou October 3 2006, 06:52:28 UTC

Yes, it did take me this long to get around to reading it.

Oh. This entire universe makes me want to sob into pillows. I'm glad you might have another in you. Ouch. But ♥♥♥. It's funny because I really almost don't want a happy perfect ending, actually. I like ending it here. Part of me wants you to go in a save everything, but I really love how imperfect this one is. If. Um, that makes any sense.

I love the repeat of keeping Tezuka safe and I love that Tezuka really did love his wife and that you didn't take away the importance of that. I don't know, I just think it's beautifully done. ♥

kessie October 23 2006, 13:44:50 UTC

Hey, it's okay. :)

I'm dithering over it. I'm not sure I want to go further into this universe, as it's very delicate and sort of like walking on very, very thin ice. There will be so happy ending in this, even if they get together again. Tezuka will always remember his wife, and Ryoma will always regret. I get exactly what you're saying as it's quite like how I feel too. :)

Thank you so much, dear.

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