[fic] a dance entirely their own

[ketchupblood]

Well, you've heard me whine about this enough, definitely.

Title: a dance entirely their own
Pairing: Tezuka/Fuji
Word Count: ~9,000
Summary: Tezuka learns that he can be something other than what he was and Fuji learns that what he wants to be is what he has always been.
A/N: I would like to send a million thanks to my wonderful betas, reddwarfer and midnightblue88.

Comments

[aoi_honoo]

Beautiful writing. :)

[ketchupblood]

Thank you! ♥

[mnemo_syne]

OMG this is so long. It's really really well-written though. Like, amazingly well...I'm kinda jealous actually. It flows. And I like the ending a lot. I always like your endings.

I think it was worth all the hair-pulling and wailing, don't you? =D

[ketchupblood]

I know! It just kept going and going past the point where I just wanted to stop writing and work on something else. D: I'm glad you liked it, though.

Would be more worth the hair pulling if it didn't take up half of my winter break. =|

[7veilsphaedra]

Lovely! I like how you've pegged that Tezuka almost needs to bundle Fuji up in his own suitcases to send him off to Germany, and that Fuji has twisted up Tezuka's injury into validating the reason that he, himself, cannot develop his gift.

I also enjoy the quiet potential between these two, just waiting for them to meet as adults.

All in your usual, calm, clear as daylight realism. Good work, ketchupblood! A satisfying read.

[ketchupblood]

Heh, Fuji doesn't even realize his own potential sometimes and he doesn't want to when he does realize what it is. Poor boy.

I'm glad you liked it! ♥

[tacuma811]

It's beautiful! And such a long fic! I like long fics XD
I love the relationship between Tezuka and Fuji. First it's kinda awkward, but later it's just like it used to be. It's really beautiful.
This part was really funny, btw: "Yuuta is so cute, especially when he's trying to pummel my Kirby to death." XD XD

[ketchupblood]

xD Who doesn't like reading long fics?

That was Luna's favorite line too! Yuuta really is Fuji's favorite person in the world, sometimes. *snugs them*

[tacuma811]

True, we all love it XD

That line was just awesome. XD XD Yuuta is indeed Fuji's favorite person in the world (when Tezuka's not around) XD

[mitsu_syusuke]

this is so beautifully written, despite the melancholy mood, there're some Fuji style humour that i can't help but chuckle..:D
the understanding between them, the comfortable silence and how they doing thins for each other.. Fuji help Tezuka to gain his confident again in tennis and Tezuka let Fuji go to chase his dream..and the underlying meaning in their conversation. it's so beautiful..

i like this fic very much, thank you for sharing! ^^

ivy

[ketchupblood]

Thanks. I like melancholy moods, though. They're fun and they bring out so much more in a character, right? :)

Thank you for this wonderful comment!