OOOOOOOOOOOOH SHITTER SHIT OOOOOOOOOOOH FUUUUUUUUUUUUCKASDASKADSJJKKJASDKJASKALSJDASSAJDLAK ajsfksdlfkdksf i just exploded
WOW. amazing chapter. amazing story in general. xD I am very impressed that you made the public-homo-relationship thing. Most fics avoid that, or make it 'not a problem' or some other way of avoiding the awkward factor. But you did so quite well, my friend!
and now i am just about to die because of poor edo!!! sdjflhaksdjfhlds j-j
THEY WERE FUCKING SMALL BACK THEN AND NOT EVEN ADULTS11 THEY CAN REALLY BLAME THEM !!sry I got to touched by this ff. I am glad you returned back to writing and helping ME back to that pair with your wonderful fanfiction!
I'm freaking out studying with my A-level exams right now and I was SO happy to find this in my inbox so I could take a break to read it. I know I always say this, but, amaaaaaaazing, as usual.
I felt really bad for Alfons here, I actually felt embarrassed for him. I was also happy that Winry took the news pretty well, she's not the sort of girl who would pine over a guy for four years and never move on, even if it is ED, so it was nice that she wasn't really pissed at Alfons for that reason.
I get the feeling Roy is the maddest though? I hope he didn't have anything to do with grassing Ed in about the Human Transmutation...
I also think I speak for everyone who follows this when I say I truly admire your dedication to writing Mirrorworld despite all the stuff that goes on in real life. It's a truly fantastic fic that's had me riveted from the first chapter.
I hope he didn't have anything to do with grassing Ed in about the Human Transmutation...
DDD: no way, man, why would Mustang want Ed dead? He may not be pleased at Alfons, but he's doing it out of protectiveness, trying to get Ed the death sentence for H.T. sounds kinda counter-productive to me! XDD rest assured, Mustang's very firmly in the Ed Camp.
I'm really glad it came out good, though. The truth is, writing MW has helped keep me sane sometimes - if I can't write, it usually means I'm pretty darn miserable :(
Phew, i'm glad about that. I just couldn't think of anyone else who knew and that maybe he'd let it slip out of carelessness with all the crazy stuff going on. Though i'm going to wrack my brains now for people who know about the transmutation and actually have a motive.
you made me get all thrilled and then crushed within one second
I guess my plan was a success? XD Hee, sounds like you enjoyed reading the h/c about as much as I enjoyed writing it. I'm really happy the chapter ended up being worth the wait.
i just had to keep myself from yelling out profanities in a very public place.
Yeep. this damn fic is a rollercoaster. Ed and Fonz are together, talking if not completely honestly, things are going well, ed has chocolate.. and then.. yeep.
Thanks for keeping up with this fic. it's quite powerful.
also, i can't help but think poor dumb acts-before-he-thinks brother-complex al said something he shouldn't have to someone he shouldn't really have trusted.
:) I'm very glad you enjoyed the chapter! And that you managed to avoid potential embarrassment XDD Don't worry, how things got to this state should be explained pretty early in next chapter but based on comments, looks like it'll be a bit of a surprise XD
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i just exploded
WOW. amazing chapter. amazing story in general. xD I am very impressed that you made the public-homo-relationship thing. Most fics avoid that, or make it 'not a problem' or some other way of avoiding the awkward factor. But you did so quite well, my friend!
and now i am just about to die because of poor edo!!! sdjflhaksdjfhlds j-j
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I agree with you on the poor Ed, though :(
I'm glad you enjoyed ♥
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gut gemacht und danke ^ ^
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I felt really bad for Alfons here, I actually felt embarrassed for him. I was also happy that Winry took the news pretty well, she's not the sort of girl who would pine over a guy for four years and never move on, even if it is ED, so it was nice that she wasn't really pissed at Alfons for that reason.
I get the feeling Roy is the maddest though? I hope he didn't have anything to do with grassing Ed in about the Human Transmutation...
I also think I speak for everyone who follows this when I say I truly admire your dedication to writing Mirrorworld despite all the stuff that goes on in real life. It's a truly fantastic fic that's had me riveted from the first chapter.
Fangirl spiel over now XD,sorry for rambling.
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DDD: no way, man, why would Mustang want Ed dead? He may not be pleased at Alfons, but he's doing it out of protectiveness, trying to get Ed the death sentence for H.T. sounds kinda counter-productive to me! XDD rest assured, Mustang's very firmly in the Ed Camp.
I'm really glad it came out good, though. The truth is, writing MW has helped keep me sane sometimes - if I can't write, it usually means I'm pretty darn miserable :(
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I guess my plan was a success? XD
Hee, sounds like you enjoyed reading the h/c about as much as I enjoyed writing it.
I'm really happy the chapter ended up being worth the wait.
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i just had to keep myself from yelling out profanities in a very public place.
Yeep. this damn fic is a rollercoaster. Ed and Fonz are together, talking if not completely honestly, things are going well, ed has chocolate.. and then.. yeep.
Thanks for keeping up with this fic. it's quite powerful.
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:) I'm very glad you enjoyed the chapter! And that you managed to avoid potential embarrassment XDD
Don't worry, how things got to this state should be explained pretty early in next chapter but based on comments, looks like it'll be a bit of a surprise XD
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I'd begin formulating theories, but they're never right with this fic...
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