Re: initial impressions!ketitaAugust 2 2010, 05:21:43 UTC
XDDD well it was implied at one point that Ed had an alternative plan, only Harris didn't like it... whether or not he's actually following that plan, now, is a different issue. Glad you liked it XDDDD
The naughty bits were awesome, and the other bits were too, and poor Al! (but maybe he'll be less of a brat?) And I can't WAIT to see what Ed has up his sleeve.
But this is an icon just for the naughty bits! and it was implied that Alfons bottomed that time anyway.
It's true that Al is being bratty, but if you think about it, nobody's really been trying to educate him. He's basically had to raise himself, and he was alone this time around. But he's trying :(
I can assure you that the other characters will be fairly displeased at Ed's shenanigans XD
I guess you're just an irredeemably naughty person XD
And I'm a bit of a fandom oddity, in that most of the time I'm not terribly interested in porn. Even in ficcing, I'm not so much of a romance lover (I know, weird to say it after MW, but it's true. My natural writing tendencies are much more gen-y. No idea how this fic happened XD)
I'm really hoping that last exchange between Harris, Ed and the judge is the beginnings of a ruse. But then 'paying the price' keeps bouncing around in my head, so...arg.
As badly as I want Alfons and Ed to be happy (and communicate, for goodness' sake), I'm also sort of hoping that someone will notice how hard Al is trying to keep it all together. Poor thing, he's been grooming himself for the sidekick role for years, but then the object of his obsession brought home the new improved model. :( It does seem like Al is seeing his brother more now as a person and not an ideal, which is good, but the poor kid must have abandoment issues like whoa. I think that is what I love most about this fic, that everyone has their own problems. Especially Ed. Boy howdy.
Al is learning now, but he also doesn't have the same kind of support Ed did. People around him really need to wake up and pay attention. I'm glad you feel for him, though. I really wanted to show his difficulties, this chapter. And yes, Ed has massive issues as well. But look at the bright side, it's not all the same issues he had at the beginning of the fic... he's gotten better... I'm very glad you enjoyed :)
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OH YOU-
*shakes fist*
AL and ED and ALFONS and ROY and EDWAAAAAAAAARD AGAIN >:EEEE
he has a plan, right? there is a plan here? *needs*
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Glad you liked it XDDDD
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The naughty bits were awesome, and the other bits were too, and poor Al! (but maybe he'll be less of a brat?) And I can't WAIT to see what Ed has up his sleeve.
This requires a special Hei icon.
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It's true that Al is being bratty, but if you think about it, nobody's really been trying to educate him. He's basically had to raise himself, and he was alone this time around. But he's trying :(
I can assure you that the other characters will be fairly displeased at Ed's shenanigans XD
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And I'm a bit of a fandom oddity, in that most of the time I'm not terribly interested in porn.
Even in ficcing, I'm not so much of a romance lover (I know, weird to say it after MW, but it's true. My natural writing tendencies are much more gen-y. No idea how this fic happened XD)
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As badly as I want Alfons and Ed to be happy (and communicate, for goodness' sake), I'm also sort of hoping that someone will notice how hard Al is trying to keep it all together. Poor thing, he's been grooming himself for the sidekick role for years, but then the object of his obsession brought home the new improved model. :( It does seem like Al is seeing his brother more now as a person and not an ideal, which is good, but the poor kid must have abandoment issues like whoa. I think that is what I love most about this fic, that everyone has their own problems. Especially Ed. Boy howdy.
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I'm glad you feel for him, though. I really wanted to show his difficulties, this chapter.
And yes, Ed has massive issues as well. But look at the bright side, it's not all the same issues he had at the beginning of the fic... he's gotten better...
I'm very glad you enjoyed :)
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