Update

[kettsdaughter]

    So I've been working my hiney off to make it through the first Camp NaNoWriMo of the year...and to my surprise Mom is actually attempting to read it.  She wanted to know if I'd just dropped down in the middle of a story because she was awfully confused.  I've read and reread my opening (the stuff I've posted on my blog), and everything makes

Comments

[aelvana]

Hm, I've been following it pretty well so far. The added description is nice, but I think it worked either way. I'm reminded of a comment someone made once about Terry Pratchett that stuck with me---he has a fairly major character, Sybil, who is never described physically beyond some very few words. The point was that it is more about who characters are than understanding what all they look like. You pull off the same thing; whether the physical description is there or not as much, the characters themselves are still really well drawn.