Smoking Hot

[didzease]

Title: Smoking Hot
Rating: PG-13 (implies a sexual situation)
Word Count: 565
Disclaimer: I don't own the Beatles, this story is purely fictive and written for enjoyment of others as well as myself.
Beta: gloigloiA/N: An one-shot, because it still had to be written, I was in the mood, and didn't really feel like writing chapterfic. Enjoy and leave a

Comments

[gloigloi]

Very nice :-)
Some lovely descriptions here. Really evocative.
There are one or two places where the grammar is not quite correct but only very minor things.

[didzease]

Oh - can you please tell me where? Because I have a hard time spotting the mistakes in grammar and now I'd really like to know which mistakes I made.

Thank you for your comment by the way. And "Inferno" has been ordered! :)

[gloigloi]

I sent you an email about your story.

I hope you enjoy Inferno as much as I did. It might give you some ideas for your story too, as you go along. :-)

[didzease]

I saw it yesterday! But I still have to take a look at it ;)

Oh, yes, I guess I will! :D I'm looking forward to finding it between the other mail :)

[coocoo4oc_slash]

This was a nice little ride of a story :D

[quazonic]

Love the descriptions! :)

[june_miller]

Great short tale! I liked the twist in the end, you fooled me!

[comingupgirl]

You fooled me too. :)
And I am totally in love with your descriptions!