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Love, Hamburg (& Company)

Nov 28, 2009 21:36

Title: Love, Hamburg (& Company)
Rating: R (just to be safe)
Word count: +/- 4K
Disclaimer: I don't own the Beatles, and I would never dare claim this has happened for real. It is merely a work of fiction.
A/N: Yeah okay, lame title, and a story that is even worse. Title and story have absolutely nothing in common, however, but yeah. I needed ( Read more... )

Comments 6

quazonic November 29 2009, 01:59:05 UTC

Ahahaaaa I liked that. :D Astrid the secret slasher, yay!

(Btw, I caught this sentence: "This time, Astrid finds does sympathise with her." ;))

june_miller November 29 2009, 12:54:39 UTC

Ahh, I love this story. Astrid a slasher and Paul predicting the future."People see what they want to see", hehehe. I like this. It goes both ways.

beagle_agent November 29 2009, 23:02:14 UTC

John is predicting the future...“And the fans...” Paul begins, with a worried face, but John cuts him off with a kiss and a smile.

“They will either not know or not mind. People only see what they want to see, remember?” Paul laughs quietly at this, and John presses another kiss against his mouth.
But no matter who...they predicted it!

Astrid

offset_reality November 29 2009, 22:23:35 UTC

Ah, very cute!

beagle_agent November 29 2009, 23:00:56 UTC

“Come on, Liebe,” she tells him,
May I correct you? The English word "love"/luv" or whatever you had in mind is translated with LIEBE, but as she addresses a male person here it must be LIEBER. Else she would talk to a female person....
No one would say that in Germany btw...how about taking SÜSSER or SCHATZ...which would be "sweetheart"? Or if you stick close to your first choice: LIEBLING which is "darling".
But LIEBE is definitely wrong here.

“They will either not know or not mind. People only see what they want to see, remember?”
Right John. Exactly what happened.

“Just wait, wait until you are famous, and all your fan girls will see the chemistry between the two of you, and like it. Perhaps they will even try to capture it.”
[...]
“Wait for what?” Paul asks awkwardly, “until they will write stories about us? Songs? Gather pictures with so-called evidence?”Predicting JohnHEARTPaul here?? Oh Astrid you are fantastic! LOL ( ... )

emiliaparanoica November 30 2009, 09:55:27 UTC

Hamburg Hamburg... the best period ever;) It feels like it's straight out of a movie.
Lovely take on Astrid's pov on the boys, and the alley kissing is FAB!!