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Anita

Dec 14, 2009 16:12

Title: Anita
Word count: +/- 4K
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: M/F interactions. Implied M/M. Dub-con! Please, if you're of the faint of heart, don't read this. Also, it portrays the Beatles (John and Paul) in a way you mightn't like.
Disclaimer: I'd never even DARE claiming the Beatles to be mine. This is only a work of fiction, nothing more. Also, for ( Read more... )

c: drama, g: het, c: sex, r: nc-17, g: real life, unlocked, f: one shot, t: savage young beatles, c: mean!beatles

Comments 15

hippie_chick69 December 14 2009, 19:28:35 UTC

I really liked this, I'd never heard of Anita before and never heard that story that you posted in the author's note, thanks for sharing the link. :)

neliana December 14 2009, 19:48:49 UTC

I think you did a really good job.
I know they haven't done a nice thing but at least you didn't make it nasty. Which probably would have been easier to write.
This was more subtle and probably harder to write and I applaud you for it.
Am glad you made them feel guilty about it though!

You shouldn't have been afraid to post this!

deux_lunes December 14 2009, 23:14:02 UTC

That's awful... But so good at the same time. You wrote it in a really morally ambiguous way (in say the same manner as "Lolita", but not in Nabokov's style, obviously), so it was bearable to read, not to mention great to read. I dig your style and your subtle slash. ^_^

Also, thanks for the link. I had only heard snippets of the Anita story before. Now, is it proven-proven that Philip is Paul's kid, or is it still debated? I'm curious. Whatever the case... Poor Philip. :/ Also, whenever I hear the name Philip, I think about nickels. That's what cartoons do to a person.

didzease December 16 2009, 15:47:11 UTC

:) Thank you!

I've always thought it wasn't tested, but emiliaparanoica told me today that it has been. Apparently Philip isn't Paul's son after all...
Cartoons don't sound very healthy to you, in that case xD Philip -> nickels, wtf?

deux_lunes December 17 2009, 23:29:21 UTC

Oh man. I feel so sorry for him. Imagine being told your entire life that you're that famous man's son... Then finding out that you aren't. It wasn't good being his son and it's worse finding out that you aren't. I really feel for him. :(

Lol. It's from the Fairly Oddparents. Cosmo had a nickel that he named Philip and it was a recurring joke throughout the episode. :D

didzease December 18 2009, 08:45:28 UTC

Well... He has always said that he didn't want to be Paul's son/didn't think he was. In the end he was right, so I suppose it might have given him some peace of mind? :)

OOOH. I think I've seen that ep. In Dutch though, hence why it made no sense at all ^^'

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macca44552 December 15 2009, 07:19:25 UTC

Just wanted to say that I absolutely LOVED this!!

I'm in a bit of a hurry at the moment; I wish I could leave a proper comment!!!

<3

didzease December 16 2009, 15:47:51 UTC

Aw, thank you for leaving a comment, even though you were in a hurry! (And you know, you can always return for said proper comment, yeah? :P)

lukinha_jesus December 15 2009, 23:51:45 UTC

Bravo my dear!

This is some powerful story you got there!

didzease December 16 2009, 15:45:07 UTC

Ah, and if I tell you that it was quite a bit of mindfuck writing this, you probably understand. Halfway through the sex-scene, I actually thought it was quite hot in a strange, fucked up way. Urgh.

Thanks for your comment x Am currently reading Red Hall (though, I'm only two paragraphs into the prologue, far too busy to really settle down and read it calmly, what with a 15 year old brother and a mother who just got home from work and has to leave again in about an hour >< argh)