Lost Art of Loving

[didzease]

Title: Lost Art of Loving
Rating: pg-13
Pairing: John/Paul
Disclaimer: the Beatles nor the prompt are mine. Neither are all of the quotes used in this story. I do not intend to make money from this, just a sh*tload of comments and a loving community. Peace on earth for everyone, you lazy people!
A/N: For the Beatles anniversary project. I figured I

Comments

[quazonic]

LET ME CORRECT THE FACTS FOR YOU ALL:

Irma || you call yourself a killer, but the only thing that you're killing is your time says (1:53 AM):
lost art of murder
Garden Gnome says (1:54 AM):
not bad XD
Irma || you call yourself a killer, but the only thing that you're killing is your time says (1:54 AM):
lost art of loving?
Garden Gnome says (1:54 AM):
the ART OF MURDER
Irma || you call yourself a killer, but the only thing that you're killing is your time says (1:54 AM):
the FART OF MURDER

I CLEARLY HAZ PROOF.

That said, I love this fic. xD

[didzease]

FY! (jk, jk!)

♥

[beatmy_heartout]

Ughhhhhh beautiful.

[grl_in_red]

Very beautiful. I get so excited when I see that you've posted something. And I'm never ever disappointed. I got very teary near the end, when Paul tells them he's leaving the band. John's discontent was very palpable, I think. It often seems to me that after 1964, there's almost no time when I can point and say, "there, there he was completely happy". There was always something.

My favorite is the beginning. The atmosphere was very present, if you know what I mean. And very sweet. Something I can imagine quite easily, and yet very powerful.

[semolina_p79]

I love how you linked this all together through the quotes from beginning to end. Beautifully done.

[lucyinthesky93]

I need to take a moment to just appreciate the beauty of this story. Really and truly gorgeous! Wow. Off to read more of your work.

And I hope you don't mind I sent an application to join the community! :3