rainbows after rain

[keyhun]

rating: pg
pairing: yunho/jaejoong
length: ~1100 wc

Comments

[elle1501]

Nice - love it... Sequel?

[keyhun]

i don't think so, i'm sorry, but you never know! thank you :)

[jaan30]

Aww ;; true love never dies *sigh* this was sweet and sad. The end is full of hope for a brighter future though<3 thanks for sharing!😘

[keyhun]

thanks <3

[hyunnyb]

I really liked the melancholic tone, the imagery and the almost surreal conversation. Definitely got the feeling that while the storm still had a ways to go there was hope for something beautiful at the end of it.
I could so imagine Jaejoong having that conversation with his cat and JiJi just walking out on him thinking 'I've heard all this before'. I enjoyed it, thanks for sharing.

[keyhun]

thank you so much for mentioning the imagery! i tried to give more focus to that this time. :)

[u_ro]

For the thing that more than love, I think it will go on for eternity. Love sometimes can fade by the passing time.
I don't feel fluffy inside when I finished reading, but somewhat hopeful. Yunho sounds promising. And they are still so much in love with each other (though he claimed that it's loved.)
I miss them so much. And I miss them even more reading this ;___;
Hope to see the rainbow again soon!

[keyhun]

thank you <3333

[n3uromanc3r]

It was lovely, I liked how they could call the other without any hesitation and their relationship seemed nice as they talked freely about anything even after the break-up!
And Jiji's characterization was just priceless!

Thank you!

[keyhun]

lol yes jiji is something else. poor jj. thank you <3