Redundant

[keylimebliss]

by: 
keylimebliss 
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Yesung/Eunhyuk
AN: For nhi, because this was the original birthday fic I deemed to sad for a birthday gift.

He’s standing in front of you nervously, holding out a red bundle of roses accented with pure white baby’s breath held by an equally white teddy bear and it’s the very realization of the perfect Valentine’

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[waruiyume80]

He’s crying now. The tears come out unbidden and he tries to hide them behind his hands, but you can still see them running down his cheek, his chin.

It’s unflattering, you think in a moment of cold-hearted harshness, to see a grown man crying so openly.

But he has always been susceptible to tears, something that the others found endearing for whatever reason.

He asks Why,what did I do wrong?

He begs, Give me a second chance.

He says, I love you. I love you.

I love you.

And in a flicker of understanding while watching the emotional mess spluttering out repetitive promises and resolutions, more I love you's in front of you, you think coldly:

How redundant.

That whole of last part got my brains numb ... this is very good.

[slarya]

Oh this was so good even if it hurts a little.
I understand Yesung (the way Hyuk is trying too hard) but seems like it's a bit his fault too, for not clarifying things from the start.
Now I want more YeHyuk because they work so well together xD

[tiggie0307]

Dang, that was sad. BUt for the looks of it something was off form the start. Too bad.

Good stuff though.

[mardigrasmaven]

That... that was really friggin good!! I liked it, I felt bad for Hyukkie that Sungie broke it off so coldly but then I felt bad for him too because he seemed so hurt at times.

[kpopxfanatic]

I'm happy because it's a YeHyuk fic.
I'm sad because of poo Hyukkie...

But it was nicely written in my opinion.
Thanks for the YeHyuk fic.
^__^